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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: July 19, 2005 04:06 CDT
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excellent story I liked you description of how youkai charateristics work. I like how you have remained focused on IxK's expanding relationship. Kouga's reaction will be interesting.
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 00:16 CDT
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Hey, it's called a Punnit square and if you can't find that look up Gregor Mendel and his pea plant research. He is the one who is credited with the idea. And yes some traits can be double dominant. There can always be more than one gene controlling the trait, such as eye color. The punnit squares are for simple genotype/phenotype calculations. They work great in theory, but you have to account for any DNA that is read wrong or has mutated, since everyone on Earth has mutations, but most of them don't show up in phyisical characteristics. Plus dominant traits aren't always the most common ones. The dominant trait is for six fingers on one hand, but most people have five. If you want websites that I think would be useful to you, email me and I'll send them to you. I don't think I could nor would it be wise to post the links on the web. But please keep updating. I love this story! Especially Rini!
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Title: Oops
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 15:00 CDT
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Well, I've been reading this story for quite a while (one chapter at a time) and just realized that I hadn't reviewed it before. This is a well plotted, brisk moving story with all the things that make a good story. Humor, angst, humor, tenderness (InuYasha style) and humor. I have enjoyed your Rimi very much. She was just how I thought a midwife should be. Keep your muse close and I hope to read your next update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad1465 On: June 12, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So glad that you are back! I have been faithfully checking in and it has finally paid off! Enjoyed the chapter and thank you for continuing. Am wondering what will happen next. I can not wait! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: June 12, 2005 03:15 CDT
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It's okay about it being short. This chapter was like a drink of water after a long day in the heat! Waiting for more!
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Reviewed By: dougk_ff7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 18:26 CDT
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Regarding the genetics thing, it's a Punnett Square. The problem is, it only works for simple traits, and may not apply in every case (things such as eye color, for example, are determined by several factors, as I recall). The idea behind it, though, is you map out all possible occurances, and can determine a probability of a certain outcome from that. Here's a little example: |B |b | -+--+--+ B|BB|Bb| -+--+--+ b|Bb|bb| -+--+--+ So, though you can't answer the original question with this, it does at least lead for some interesting interpretations. I just wouldn't analyze it, though: hurts less. Anyway, nice job with the story... it's been good to read so far, you've added some nice twists, and I've had fun reading it. No real complaints about typos or anything of that sort (which makes the reading a thousand times better). Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 11, 2005 09:41 CDT
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Still loving this story! About to leave by computer for a few weeks to do some traveling in Japan. The new chapter was a nice going away present. Thanks! Looking forward to reading more when I get back.
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Reviewed By: ME On: May 15, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still loving your fic from start to end---am SO hoping you'll be updating soon---you left off at a, shall we say, fascinating part???? I just love your portrayal of Inu/Kag and their relationship. Can't wait to read your next chapter--and I DO understand life has a way of getting into things, but just wanted to let you know that we're out here *looks around at all your fans* and still interested in this wonderful fic.......so....update when you can ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: March 13, 2005 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update I just cant wait for the next one. The half Hanyou and human thing. If you do a puntic square or whatever the hell its called you'll come to the conclusion that the child woold be half demon no matter what. Its the dominant traits that hold its place. And there demon. So will you try to update soon!?
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Reviewed By: Sesshy-lover. On: March 04, 2005 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why won't you right moreeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: March 02, 2005 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it's been a long time!!! Well I finally got some time to read and I loved it! But it was such a tease! And they were making such progress! But update whenever you can and I'll read whenever I can.
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Title: Sesshy-lover
Reviewed By: Oi! On: February 17, 2005 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear if you end this story at ch.23 I will hunt you Down!\_/
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Title: Awesomly cool fic
Reviewed By: Sesshy-lover On: February 16, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely "LOVED" it. I just kinda got scared when Kagome was acting all crazy!
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Title: update
Reviewed By: essie2 On: February 14, 2005 09:45 CST
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great please update
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 13, 2005 22:50 CST
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Great chapter. This story has very nice pacing and character development. I'm certainly looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your work!
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