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Reviewed By: Inu Nagi On: June 20, 2003 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep it going..were all waiting for an update soon!!!!!!!
*begs her to do another chapter* |
Reviewed By: Rune2003 On: June 10, 2003 06:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!UPDATE SOON |
Reviewed By: Syn_AnimeFanChick On: June 09, 2003 00:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its lovly I put it on favorites in hopes to read more, really funny too EWWWW MOOOOOOOOOM KAGOME AND INU YASHA!!!!! lol I busted up at that...hehehe DOGGY EARS *rubs the demonic doggy ears* keep up the good work...I started reading it a bit skeptical at first but I ended up loving teh story, even though (no offence) shippo seemed a bit more aware of things than usual |
Reviewed By: caliko On: June 08, 2003 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am loving this! ^_^ Please, don't make us wait too much longer! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: June 08, 2003 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, interesting story so far. I like how the 'accident' happened.
Anti-Sesshomaru... *snerk* XD |
Reviewed By: Inu Nagi..little visitor from anime chains message board lol On: June 07, 2003 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what else a good good Inu Yasha and Kagome pairing.A couple of favorite parts include her talk with sango about her 'choice' and why she choose it..Kagome made a good choice (trying not to spoil it for those who haven't read it yet.)....the most recent chapter has kago's little bro making a 'grand' entrance into kagome and inu's 'talk' heh.....im sure thats happened to some of us before.....Tail wagger has some great real life moments going on in here and thats what i like about it.....please keep going on it....we all want to read more!!!
~Inu Nagi |
Reviewed By: Natsuko On: June 07, 2003 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. Good job. I liked the way you wrote the love part in chapter 2, I think it fit for the moment and gave a needed brake to the normal style of writing that you see in basicly every fic. The last chapter made me laugh.
Only one thing though, I think that it might have been a little better if you had made it slightly AU, if only to make her a little older. Maybe the big exams she was taking were for finnishing up high school, then she would be 18 and could take a year off to situate her life with a child. It would still be kinda bad and unusual for her to have child, but it wouldn't be as bad as it would be if she were 15 and still in HS. Then atleast she wouldn't have to drop out when she started to show.
Otherwise very nice. :-) is there more? |
Reviewed By: Miyu Yomano [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello I love your fic please update soon *droolz* |
Reviewed By: NekoYasha On: June 02, 2003 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
although this is my first review; 3 words4u, fab-u-lous. very unique and very very enjoyable. ahh adrenaline, the best stuff on earth ;) please oh please continue!! |
Reviewed By: Sorrow On: June 02, 2003 20:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story you must write more whats going to happen. |
Reviewed By: Draco On: June 02, 2003 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing and the way that this fic is turning out. I hope that you continue.. Eh, not good at reviews. I would just like to mention that this fanfic is enjoyable and I do expect to see it to the end. ^^ Keep up the good work! Long chapters are always welcomed, too. ^~ |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep writing. I love this story. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: May 12, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought that was really funnE because neither o' them even knew wat tha hell was happenin', at least not consciously. heheheheheh.... but all in all itz kute.. are u gonna add more? update, k? |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: May 08, 2003 10:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh me oh my the wonders of adrenaline. Keep writing more please. This is awsome.
SHADY |
Reviewed By: Tramp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Chapter one was great, if short. Chapter two was well written, with a few grammatical errors here and there. The only problem I had with it was that the love-making was too rushed. It was like "wam, bam, and it's over. I'd have drawn it out more and gone into more detail. Chapter three was excellent. I loved the way you dealt with the characters' conflicting emotions and trying to deal with the reprocussions of the previous night's "events". I wonder what other reprocussions there might be... |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 22:15 CDT
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oooh! I am really enjoying this. Glad I added you to my "faves" list! Can hardly wait for the next update . . . |
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