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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 17, 2004 23:51 CDT
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I thought the chapter was good!!!!!!!!! And can't wait for the rest!!!!!! I want to see how Inuyasha is going to react when Kagome starts showing!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 17, 2004 13:18 CDT
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thanks for continuing with this story. It's been intersting.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 00:12 CDT
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this a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: *Aitu (not signed in) On: May 16, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again. I loved the chapter. The reviewer below me was right in saying sometimes you don't need too illistrate the sex as much to make it seem like an intimate act. I think that in last chapter, (yura), it turned out perfectly. In fact, in some fic the sex scenes become so repetative that you can predict exactly what is going to happen next; I even skip some them sometimes due to that fact. Keep up the good work and I hope that you update soon-- you have a really good thing going here.
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Reviewed By: mandapanda On: April 26, 2004 00:52 CDT
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As fun as lemons are to read and write I am very happy you left the chapter like that, sometimes you can have the intimacy without the sex and still be effective good job.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 22:09 CDT
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I completely understand about you not wanting to take away from the improtant part of the story, really I do. I promise!!!! Now please can we see the next chapter!?!?!?!?!? I really liked this chapter it was so well written and I was just so happy to get an update from you. Where were you? I thought you had left poor little me to twist in the wind with not knowing what was going to happen next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OOPS
Reviewed By: SwtRose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 21:23 CDT
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You're back.........yeah.......thanks we will not lynch you for your stopping point, just don't let it happen again.. !!!!! love the bath scene Rose
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Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 16:59 CDT
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That was pretty good! I felt so bad for Kagome though...she was just so shy around Inuyasha...oh well I loved the chapter so please update again soon when you can! ^_^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 16:02 CDT
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this is a good fanfic very good please please please update soon
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Reviewed By: Missymelissa On: April 17, 2004 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is truly amazing, i would be ecstatic if you could write another chappie for everyone to read soon! Keep up the extrodinary work! Sincerely, *Missy*
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more soon please. It's so good please write more.
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Reviewed By: queen of hell 225 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfic its sooooooooo goood. your a really grat writter. When r u going to post the other chapters ill bet there going to be just as good as the other ones.
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Reviewed By: queen of hell 225 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfic its sooooooooo goood. your a really grat writter. When r u going to post the other chapters ill bet there going to be just as good as the other ones.
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: whats with the titles
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me (not signed in) On: March 17, 2004 23:42 CST
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you must uyp date soon please!!!! i love the story it is so good no its great and a million words that mean great or good to....up date
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