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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:43 CDT
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yay!!! this is a really good story! i really hope you finish it!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: October 20, 2004 22:02 CDT
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That gave me a headache...Maybe you could break it down a bit more? But I want to know how Kagome is too! And I would love to hear more about Sesshoumaru's birth! And how his mother died in detail. But anyway, amazing chapter! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was awesome! I don't want Kagome to loose the baby! that would be cruel!!! Maybe she could recover from it! Yeah! Well, Update soon! PLEASE?!!
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was awesome! I don't want Kagome to loose the baby! that would be cruel!!! Maybe she could recover from it! Yeah! Well, Update soon! PLEASE?!!
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Reviewed By: Azmidiske On: September 16, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, regrettably though I just cannot finish reading it. Perhaps I have read one too many stories where Kagome and Inuyasha's first sexual experience ends in a pregnancy. That is so rare, but in Storys it happens every time. I also always found it very likely that a Hanyou would be infertile, like a mule. Regardless of my own personal views though, you did do a good job, and I congratulate you.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: September 12, 2004 09:15 CDT
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YYYAAAAYYY!!!!!! It was a wonderful chapter!!!! Good ending! And now I really want to know what happens so please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is great and i love the idea. the opening to the end has been great. i hope you add more when you get the chance. really great idea and very well written.
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Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 01:47 CDT
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*laugh* I loved InuYasha's lines, "Eventually he decided he should get dressed. After all, there were things that had to be said. Damned if he knew what they were, but he knew he wanted to be fully clothed to say them." *laugh* *sniffle* *teary eyes* *snort*
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 21:26 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Title: *smiles*
Reviewed By: milady On: July 28, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very, very, very good and so very, very, very cute... I hope you update very, very, very soon...
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Reviewed By: Evie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 02:07 CDT
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I'm really intrigued. A lot of people wouldn't have been able to pull off this kind of story for this series, but you have the a touch. Side note: You keep on typing in "waist" where the word should be spelled "waste" and "sent" where it should be "scent." The story doesn't suffer, but it's still a minor irritation.
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_Hater [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really Really loved it! I cant belive that they think Kagome is a "drugged up conniving whore"!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:24 CDT
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I feel sorry for Kagome. The way everyone is talking about her and everything. I don't understand how they can come up with that stuff when everyone knows she was blowing Hojo off for the longest time, she only went on one date with him. But that was so cute Inuyasha could hear the heart beat!!!!!! I wonder if it's a boy or a girl? Update Update Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Huntress19 On: June 13, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this one I like the story line and how well the characters are put together I hope that you continue to write in the future. And a suggestion before you post the next one check the spelling and the words some of them are missing letters and are written with the wrong word in place. but keep writing you do an amazing job. Huntress19
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 20:12 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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