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Reviewed By: notzathros On: February 13, 2005 22:50 CST
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Great chapter. This story has very nice pacing and character development. I'm certainly looking forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing your work!
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Reviewed By: JasonCaruso On: February 07, 2005 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. No realy. When cane the next updaye be expected.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 22:03 CST
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this is great please update
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: InuyashaXkagome4lyf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 04:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. and i most say im a picky person when it comes to kagome and inuyasha...but i dunno this story just peeks my intrest. and its so cute and loving and sweet. and Well i LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: December 13, 2004 13:14 CST
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That was great and it answered alot of questions!!! I would blush just as hard as Kagome if my boyfriend started talking about "tasting" me. I just think that all women are alittle self-concious when it comes to that. I mean there are alot of worries we have about that place down there... I'm glad she told the story about Sesshoumaru's birth. And it is so funny when she started going on about Inuyasha's birth! I wouldn't mind if you finished that little story too *wink wink*. Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kadaede [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, this is awesome!
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 19:08 CST
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and a lovely six words they are
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 08, 2004 11:20 CST
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i hope you update again soon! i want to know what happens!
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Title: it can't be finished!!
Reviewed By: anime fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it says the story is completed?! nnnooo... what happens to the baby, and does inu finally say he loves her... and what about sange and miroku... don't finish it there!!! please add alot more chappies... it's too good of a story for u to leave us haging like that.
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:43 CDT
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yay!!! this is a really good story! i really hope you finish it!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: October 20, 2004 22:02 CDT
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That gave me a headache...Maybe you could break it down a bit more? But I want to know how Kagome is too! And I would love to hear more about Sesshoumaru's birth! And how his mother died in detail. But anyway, amazing chapter! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was awesome! I don't want Kagome to loose the baby! that would be cruel!!! Maybe she could recover from it! Yeah! Well, Update soon! PLEASE?!!
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was awesome! I don't want Kagome to loose the baby! that would be cruel!!! Maybe she could recover from it! Yeah! Well, Update soon! PLEASE?!!
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Reviewed By: Azmidiske On: September 16, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, regrettably though I just cannot finish reading it. Perhaps I have read one too many stories where Kagome and Inuyasha's first sexual experience ends in a pregnancy. That is so rare, but in Storys it happens every time. I also always found it very likely that a Hanyou would be infertile, like a mule. Regardless of my own personal views though, you did do a good job, and I congratulate you.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: September 12, 2004 09:15 CDT
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YYYAAAAYYY!!!!!! It was a wonderful chapter!!!! Good ending! And now I really want to know what happens so please update soon!!!!
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