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Reviewed By: Evie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 02:07 CDT
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I'm really intrigued. A lot of people wouldn't have been able to pull off this kind of story for this series, but you have the a touch. Side note: You keep on typing in "waist" where the word should be spelled "waste" and "sent" where it should be "scent." The story doesn't suffer, but it's still a minor irritation.
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_Hater [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really Really loved it! I cant belive that they think Kagome is a "drugged up conniving whore"!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:24 CDT
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I feel sorry for Kagome. The way everyone is talking about her and everything. I don't understand how they can come up with that stuff when everyone knows she was blowing Hojo off for the longest time, she only went on one date with him. But that was so cute Inuyasha could hear the heart beat!!!!!! I wonder if it's a boy or a girl? Update Update Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Huntress19 On: June 13, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this one I like the story line and how well the characters are put together I hope that you continue to write in the future. And a suggestion before you post the next one check the spelling and the words some of them are missing letters and are written with the wrong word in place. but keep writing you do an amazing job. Huntress19
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 20:12 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic plz update soon.Pretty please.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 19:11 CDT
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this is a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 26, 2004 18:30 CDT
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Oooooookkkaaaaayyyy, who started the rumor??? And what's wrong with Inuyasha??? I'm sure Kagome's couldn't have said something to make him upset like that!! I wanna know I wanna know!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 17, 2004 23:51 CDT
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I thought the chapter was good!!!!!!!!! And can't wait for the rest!!!!!! I want to see how Inuyasha is going to react when Kagome starts showing!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 17, 2004 13:18 CDT
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thanks for continuing with this story. It's been intersting.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 00:12 CDT
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this a great fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: *Aitu (not signed in) On: May 16, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again. I loved the chapter. The reviewer below me was right in saying sometimes you don't need too illistrate the sex as much to make it seem like an intimate act. I think that in last chapter, (yura), it turned out perfectly. In fact, in some fic the sex scenes become so repetative that you can predict exactly what is going to happen next; I even skip some them sometimes due to that fact. Keep up the good work and I hope that you update soon-- you have a really good thing going here.
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Reviewed By: mandapanda On: April 26, 2004 00:52 CDT
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As fun as lemons are to read and write I am very happy you left the chapter like that, sometimes you can have the intimacy without the sex and still be effective good job.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 22:09 CDT
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I completely understand about you not wanting to take away from the improtant part of the story, really I do. I promise!!!! Now please can we see the next chapter!?!?!?!?!? I really liked this chapter it was so well written and I was just so happy to get an update from you. Where were you? I thought you had left poor little me to twist in the wind with not knowing what was going to happen next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OOPS
Reviewed By: SwtRose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 21:23 CDT
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You're back.........yeah.......thanks we will not lynch you for your stopping point, just don't let it happen again.. !!!!! love the bath scene Rose
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