"Oops" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sorrow On: June 02, 2003 20:13 CDT Comment/Review: I love your story you must write more whats going to happen. |
Reviewed By: Draco On: June 02, 2003 14:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love your style of writing and the way that this fic is turning out. I hope that you continue.. Eh, not good at reviews. I would just like to mention that this fanfic is enjoyable and I do expect to see it to the end. ^^ Keep up the good work! Long chapters are always welcomed, too. ^~ |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 22:50 CDT Comment/Review: Keep writing. I love this story. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: May 12, 2003 16:35 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i thought that was really funnE because neither o' them even knew wat tha hell was happenin', at least not consciously. heheheheheh.... but all in all itz kute.. are u gonna add more? update, k? |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: May 08, 2003 10:18 CDT Comment/Review: Oh me oh my the wonders of adrenaline. Keep writing more please. This is awsome.
SHADY |
Reviewed By: Tramp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 20:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I like it. Chapter one was great, if short. Chapter two was well written, with a few grammatical errors here and there. The only problem I had with it was that the love-making was too rushed. It was like "wam, bam, and it's over. I'd have drawn it out more and gone into more detail. Chapter three was excellent. I loved the way you dealt with the characters' conflicting emotions and trying to deal with the reprocussions of the previous night's "events". I wonder what other reprocussions there might be... |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 22:15 CDT Comment/Review: oooh! I am really enjoying this. Glad I added you to my "faves" list! Can hardly wait for the next update . . . |
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