| "A Minds Want, A Hearts Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Saturn Princess On: April 02, 2005 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that is an awsome fic really u should update like soon!! and your rating are all 10's because there were no 20's
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Reviewed By: shilo On: March 26, 2005 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god i love this fic. you have got to update i am in love with this fic it is one of the best that i have read and i don't read alot of really good fics. you didn't even make a mistake on spelling and grammer and i read alot of fics with mistakes in them on that subject. it was fun reading this it was like as if you where in the story. it was great you just got to update soon so i can find out what is going to happen next.
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: March 31, 2004 02:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm loving the story so far. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ABC,,,123 On: January 19, 2004 02:31 CST
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Oh, and I would like to compliment on the wicked burns to the flamer.
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Reviewed By: ABC,,,123 On: January 19, 2004 02:28 CST
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Oh and anyone is free to use GRIZZLY BEAR in their fic if they want to lively it up.
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Reviewed By: ABC,,,123 On: January 19, 2004 02:27 CST
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Thanks for your advice on handling flamers. So, it's like this. EXAMPLE FLAMER: YOUR FIC IS BULL SHIT! ALL YOU EVER DO IS TOURNAMENTS AND SHIT LIKE THAT! AND THE PART OF IT IS THAT THE JOKES ARE WAY OUT OF DATE! SERIOUSLY< YOU SHOULD TRY TO COME UP WITH SOME NEW AND ORIGINAL IDEAS YOU STUPID BASTARD! GO TO HELL AND TAKE YOUR STUPID FIC WITH YOU! Okay, let's see now. That person flames me. I just sic GRIZZLY BEAR on that person. (GIRZZLY BEAR gets pissed off) GRIZZLY BEAR: RRRROOOOAAAARRRGGGGHHHHH!!!!! *BAM!* (GRIZZLY BEAR knocks their head off) A very well done speech if I do say so myself. Let all of those particualer flamers go to hell if they have not written one single fic. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: bumschwah On: January 19, 2004 02:15 CST
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When will you update!?
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Reviewed By: tt43 On: October 12, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!!!! You have to update soon !!!!!!! I loved the way you brought of the way of the people!!!! If you made up that bond thing I think you should star writing for DBZ!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Griever_13089 On: July 29, 2003 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SO GREAT! YOU BARELY EVER FIND A GOHAN/VIDEL FIC AS GOOD AS THIS !! I THINK IM GONNA CRY !! XD
MORE PEOPLE NEED TO REVIEW THIS FIC !! |
Reviewed By: loneeaglegoys On: July 26, 2003 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story so please finsh it |
Reviewed By: Karete-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
amazing! I found a gohan/videl fic I actually liked! You are a miracle worker |
Reviewed By: ukuk On: April 27, 2003 05:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great |
Reviewed By: ukuk On: April 26, 2003 04:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, I can't wait till you bring more chapters out. |
Reviewed By: Griever_130 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M REVIEWING AGAIN BECAUSE EVER SINCE I'VE JOINED AND POSTED A FIC THAT I'VE BEEN WRITING FOR A WHILE!!! THIS FIC IS SO GOOD IT INSPIRED ME!! PLEASE CONTINUE VERY SOON!!!! IT'S EXCELLENT !!!! |
Reviewed By: KawaiiShinigami On: July 15, 2003 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo!! I'm liking this badass version of Gohan! ;) *squeals like the fangirl she is* ^^ And yes, that whole flaming fiasco was a bit much...But grammar doesn't matter to me! (mainly b/c I'm horrible at it ^^;; ) But pleeeeeeeeeeeeease, update soon!!! |
