| "Light in My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This fic is really amazing, it is so well written that I just love it. I would never imagine I would read an Akito/Toruh fic. You were right, if it is a good story it doesn't matter with who is she going to end up. It was wonderful the way you changed Akito's feelings for her, how you managed the situation with the rest of the family, you never rushed things, all seemed so natural, their reactions and personalities were really like in the anime. Congratulations for such a great work!!! You deserve much more reviews...
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Reviewed By: avairgirl202 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this story. I swear, I have never been a fan of Tohru/Akito, but this I just loved. I actually have a favor to ask. Can you write a sotry just as good as this but with Yuki, Kyo, Momiji, Akito, and Haru all likeing Tohru, and in the end she choses Haru? Please!!! Okay, you prob won't, but it doesn't hurt me from asking. Anyway, I LOVED this story, and its in my favs and everything.
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Title: Genius
Reviewed By: Rain_at_Midnight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pure genius! I love it!
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. No other word to explain this fanfic. Just.... Wow again. I think this is on my top 2 favorite Fruits Basket fanfics list. =D (And trust me, I've read a lot of 'em...) I mean, even though Akito-san's a girl later in story, you've kept him as a guy here and it TOTALLY WORKED. I mean, EVERYTHING you typed worked!! Especially the way Akito's feelings changed over time. Because, in some stories that are really crappy and short, the immediate change in personality is absolutely REVOLTING!!! For example, in some stories, the main character is sudenly thinking "oh, why am I doing this? Oh well," in, like, THE FIRST CHAPTER. Some stories are retarded like that... But your story is so awesome because it really shows how things change over time, not just in a day or two. I don't know if you know what I mean, but I hope you do... And Tohru! You've completely mastered the mind of Tohru! As well as the other characters also! You should totally be a real author if you aren't already. Because I'm just a girl who writes tiny fanfics that don't really mean much, but this fanfic is one of the best I've ever read, out of like 500 total. Lovelyyy. I absolutely ADORE you and your work!!! YAY!!
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Reviewed By: JesuisLily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is so good! It is believeable to the real anime story plot and characteristics. Especially i'm such a FB obsesser, i read the whole story in 2 hours!! I couldn't peel my eyes away! Thank you so much for writing this!
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Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 16:39 CDT
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Font Color Wow, this is very good. You have lots of talent for writing. I love your wrting, it flows so well and you have the sense to use the ever-wonderful spell checker! Good for you!Font Color
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Reviewed By: Frankie Crow On: June 09, 2005 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My first time reading an Akito/Tohru fic and liking it. I'm adding you to my favorites list. Great job. I love your work. Grammer is a little off but it's still wonderful to read. {9.5/10} ^-^
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Reviewed By: Blue Iris On: July 20, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo good! I wish you wrote more though it seemed like you ended this story kinda quickly. Well, other than that this story is a beautiful example of how a fanfiction should be written. Opps it sounded like I just insulted some fanfiction writers!O_O I didn't mean it to sound that way then again maybe I did. 0_0;;
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Reviewed By: Caitlin On: November 16, 2003 15:28 CST
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*begins to cry* That was absolutely..wonderful. You captured their personalities amazingly well, and how you made Tohru and Akito's love develop (instead of suddenly appearing one day) was brilliant. I have to say..thank you. It's very refreshing to read an actual well written story these days. Cheers.
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Reviewed By: Mirialdo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this ^-^ and I loved the way you wrote everyone! -gives cookies- |
Reviewed By: Nogitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it! The pairing was very creative, mainly because I never thought of Tohru and Akito as ever being to love each other! It's so~ great! |
Reviewed By: chibichibi-neko On: May 20, 2003 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great ficcie ! I just had to comment again |
