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| "Never Let Go" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
As if there's always is a ray of light. How delusional can you get?
~Fithos lusec wecos vinosec~ | Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its pretty clear that its an AU fic. the real ash would never leave pikachu before misty. but anyways, this is my fav of ur fics so far. by far. though id have thought that it would hurt misty more since the water at the beach would wash away some of her wetness, and it was her first time. but who cares, it was just ash's journal entry. though short, its a pretty nice fic. i would have liked to no the names of the kids, since they technically should be of great importance to ash, but o well.
chara | Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Remember how every kid in Pokemon dropped out of school in 5th grade to get their liscense and go catch Pokemon? Yeah, you must not. How do you get accepted to a top university when you dont have an education higher than the fifth grade?
Other than that, no probs. A little short though. |
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