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| "Stronger Than Before" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yana and Yeira: *surprised* Our brothers are MARRIED!!!
Fire: Oh calm down it's only fiction!
Yeira: Ok I'm calm, but I have to say Mokuba is getting CUTE!
Yana: Oh gods!
Fire:Well at least Yugi is taller!
Yana: Hey! There's tall genes in our family! I'm almost as tall Seto!Only an inch shorter!
Yeira: Same here!
Fire: Whatever.*sighs*
Yeira: Well it was great Dreamer and Dragon! I can't wait to read the rest! And this time I promise not to get mad!
Fire and Yana: GOOD!
Fire: I agree with Yeira!It was great! My next chappie is almost all thought out. I just need to think of a beginning.
Yana: Well that's good!
Yeira: Not for you. | Reviewed By: Yathtallar Infinity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 13:49 CDT
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Nice! It's pretty good that they've got conflict; things going well never really make for an interesting story. Too bad for the charas, eh? Sucks to be you guys! ^_^ Anyhow, it's pretty cool how Tristan's turning all Seto-ish... I mean, how did people THINK he got that way, being born like it? Very interesting with the attempts at producing scandals. I can only imagine what Bakura is going to do to that lady, and I can almost pity her.... almost. *Gives Bakura a flamethrower, hand crossbow with poisoned bolts, and a whip* >=) | Reviewed By: Mineko and her Yami! On: April 30, 2003 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mineko: WHAT?! *sob* Only... *sob* one... *sob* chapter and... *sob* a... *sob* prolugue?! Nooo... *sob*
Yami M.: Hush; it'll be okay; I'm sure there'll be a new chaper sooner or later...
Mineko: *chokes in mid-sob* You're being... nice? I've lost it!
Yami M.: Well, yes, I've been meaning to talk to you about that...
Mineko: *breaths sigh of releif* Phew, and here I thought I was stuck in a nightmare or something... YOU'RE GONNA GET IT!
Both: *Catfight*
Yami M.: Mwuhahahaha... Anyway, I think I speak for both my hikari and myself when I say WRITE MORE! You HAVE to!
Mineko: *suddenly jumps up and gets her yami in a headlock* Alright already; you're being overdramatic. Anyway, I guess there's nothing to do but check every hour or so... *sigh* | Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2003 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: WE love this fic so far!!
Kathrine: I want Yami tyo send the bitch of a reporter to the Sgadow Realm orgive her to my 'Kura!!
JC: Why so harsh?
Kathrine: She's screwing with their lives and relationships! Only I get to do that!
JC: Okay... Well, we like how this is going and can't wait for the next chapter! A LEMON is the first chapter with definitely get you brownie points with us too.
Kathrine: Keep up the GREAT work! | Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 10:51 CDT
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LD: My, my, Yugi's a little sex machine, isn't he?
Karen: Mmmmm, that was... nice
LD: * snickers * Oh, she is as good as gone.
Karen: Humph, I am not. I think Bakura should kill the damn reporter. Trying to make my bishie's lives a living hell.
LD: Tisk, tisk, so violent. Isn't that my job?
Karen: Grrrr. Ok, I'm calm.
LD: Bring on the torture! | Reviewed By: MJ On: April 29, 2003 08:57 CDT
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I like this one better than the first one..maybe because I can relate to the workaholics of the world.
I agreed with Bakura..someone needs to die..MMWWHAHHAAAA | Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: I'm gonna kill someone Pulls out shotgun that says, 'Omae o Korosu' on the side. Shhh... I'm a huntin' me a bandit. *Lets out Elmer Fudd laugh*
Kathrine: No more Looney Tunes for you. *JC is already gone* Oh well, this was great. Love the seme Yugi and uke Seto. Been dying for one of those. *Grins* I love how you have Keith abusing Joey and then acting like it was the drugs that did it. Proves that not all people do bad things because of the 'high' their on. And...*Turns to see JC return with blood all over her* What happened? Did you kill Keith?
JC: Nah, this is Joey's blood. It was all over the floor and I was trampled by the fans beating on Keith and him with frying pans. I got up and ended up with Joey's blood sticking to me. But now, I'm going to clean off.
Kathrine: Leave the clothes, I'll put them in the collection with my clothing covered in the blood from GW and RW characters.
JC: What? No way, that's sick. *Runs off to bathroom*
Kathrine: Good she's gone again. Now, we think that Keith should fuck up and Joey runs off without thinking. That way someone can find him and then Joey can be all protective of Keith and everything can go even farther down the drain. Joey needs to be hurt really bad or something. I happen to enjoy torturing the poor emotionally disoriented blonde. ^_^ Can't wait for next chapter. | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] |
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