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Title: BLOOD LUST BAKURA!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: That was a great chapter. Kathrine: More of a swelling of the plot than action. JC: Yeah, like the 'tension' between Joey and Tristan. Kathrine: Gods, please PLEASE let Bakura kill that Knowles bitch! WE'LL DO ANYTHING IF YOU DO!! JC: Gods, I would just love to see what Marik and Bakura could do to her together. They're both such psychos. Kathrine: Great chapter. And you've got me falling for Lexi. Very strange seeing as I would rather bleed to death from my feet than have a child of our own. JC: I knew she'd come around. NO ONE ESCAPES THE CHIBI KAWAIINESS!!!! Kathrine: Yeah...whatever. Can't wait for next chapter. Definitely looking forward to the new scent of the day, lemon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: November 08, 2003 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, i know..well, you were asleep and I was on mmorg and decided 'Holy Poop on a stick! I better review!' Awww........HORRAY FOR CHIBIS!!!!Lexi and Justin are so cute! 'Lexi nee a papa........' OO! *SQUISH* This was a cute update, babe. *hugs Joe-be plushies*
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good as usual. The Tristan /Seto bound sounds like an interesting twist. Lexi is addorable and Justin sounds like a chibi Seto.
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Reviewed By: Kysarin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unfortunately I can't give more than 10 on the enjoyment factor. Doh. Seriously though, hurry up and get to Lexi!! You're driving me insane. I'm going to have to write something with a plot and leave EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER with the cliff-hanger of all cliffhangers for revenge. *goes back to re-read the YamixYugixKaiba lemons*
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Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kathrine: YEAH!!!! This is such a great story. JC: We'd actually forgotten about it for a while, almost lost interest. Kathrine: Guess it's because we've been searching for other Anime fics. But then we come back and I find that we missed out a whole LOT! JC: It's good that Joey is getting better and I love how Otogi fits into all of this with Master Kiotou. It's just perfect. Kathrine: And I like how their adopting children with physical disorders. JC: Yeah, we've always wanted to be able to adopt a child we could help with problems like those. Kathrine: Justin seems like a great kid and in a way a mix between Seto and us. Seto's Japanese, we're African (from our Dad) and we have the same light sensitivity disorder. JC: That's just cool. We've never ofund someone's OC that we could link to ourselves until now, even if he is just four. Kathrine: We hope that everything works out for you though with you 'withdrawal'. Take the time you need to work it out before coming back to writing. Either that or the stress will definitely get to you. JC: Wishes for the best!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww that was such a sweet chapter. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: obsessed_animegurl On: October 23, 2003 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg i absolutely love this fic! please keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 22, 2003 10:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Leave it to Yami and Yugi to relax someone... MMMMMMMMMMM!!!!
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Reviewed By: KC On: September 25, 2003 23:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, why didn't u updated yet? Update the one here, and in adultfanfiction.net!!! i really, really want to find out!!!
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Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kathrine: That was mecha sweet! I just LOVED it!
JC: We knew something like this was going to happen!
Kathrine: Keith's probably gonna try and make Joey leave the city now. Well, and now Yugi knows that Joey's getting high so everything's going down a shit hole.
JC: So, is Keith's gonna beat Joey again? I mean, the guy's so fuckin' messed in the head that he keeps telling himself the guy loves him.
Kathrine: Didn't he do that at first with his dad? I'm seeing a pattern.
JC: And now Tristan can sleep with Seto! Hehehee... Am I the only one that see humor in that conversation?
Kathrine: I think my desensitization methods are working. ^_^ Please update soon so we can know what happens! |
Reviewed By: ShiningStar On: June 17, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story but poor Joey has to get hooked on pot and coke again. I hope they find each other again. |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raine: Well that was sure interesting! I thought it was great!
Yana: Poor little Yugi!
Yeira: It's ok I'm here for him!
Yana: Hey! He is MY brother! You have your brother you know!
Yeira: *sarcastically* Yeah yeah.
Raine: Hey and just so you know, I'm going to be writing another story! I'll tell you when I get started! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raine: Great chappie!
Yeira: *shudders at the thought of Keith*
Yana: Well I bet Yeira is enjoying this fic!
Yeira: Shut it hakari!
Raine: Yana! Remember the phrase "keep it a secret!"?
Yana: Oh yea!
Raine: Oh sweet Isis! Oh and by the way did you get our e-mail? YOu might want to read it if you did..... we found out what's going on with Yeira and you know who!
Yana:Poor Yami! He'll be crushed!
Raine: Would you just SHUT UP!
Yana: OK OK OK! |
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: You have to continue!
Kathrine: This is the second story I've read where something bad actually happens to Tristan! You can't just leave it like this!
JC: You are a very articulate writer. Love how you've had lemons or implied 'acts' in every chapter.
Kathrine: That's just how lots of adults are when they're in love probably. Have to be in each others' pants 24/7.
JC: Can't wqit for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeira: Ok well, that was interesting.
Yana: You're telling me!
Raine: I loved it as usual. It just came as a shock to Yeira mostly because of what I do to her in my sequel to Past. *snickers*
Yeira: That's NOT funny Raine!
Yana: Yes it is!
Raine: Well I finally started the final chappie to Past!
Yana: YAY!
Yeira: It's about time!
Raine: Yeah, yeah.
Yeira: Well I have to go run the club! BYE!
Raine:BYE!
Yana: BYE! Oh and now I know NOT to tempt Dragon into doing anything!
Raine: Thank the gods! |
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