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"Stronger Than Before" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ]
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 Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon  On: October 22, 2003 10:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Leave it to Yami and Yugi to relax someone... MMMMMMMMMMM!!!!
 Reviewed By: KC  On: September 25, 2003 23:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, why didn't u updated yet? Update the one here, and in adultfanfiction.net!!! i really, really want to find out!!!
 Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kathrine: That was mecha sweet! I just LOVED it!
JC: We knew something like this was going to happen!
Kathrine: Keith's probably gonna try and make Joey leave the city now. Well, and now Yugi knows that Joey's getting high so everything's going down a shit hole.
JC: So, is Keith's gonna beat Joey again? I mean, the guy's so fuckin' messed in the head that he keeps telling himself the guy loves him.
Kathrine: Didn't he do that at first with his dad? I'm seeing a pattern.
JC: And now Tristan can sleep with Seto! Hehehee... Am I the only one that see humor in that conversation?
Kathrine: I think my desensitization methods are working. ^_^ Please update soon so we can know what happens!
 Reviewed By: ShiningStar  On: June 17, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It is a great story but poor Joey has to get hooked on pot and coke again. I hope they find each other again.
 Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 05, 2003 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Raine: Well that was sure interesting! I thought it was great!

Yana: Poor little Yugi!

Yeira: It's ok I'm here for him!

Yana: Hey! He is MY brother! You have your brother you know!

Yeira: *sarcastically* Yeah yeah.

Raine: Hey and just so you know, I'm going to be writing another story! I'll tell you when I get started! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 31, 2003 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Raine: Great chappie!

Yeira: *shudders at the thought of Keith*

Yana: Well I bet Yeira is enjoying this fic!

Yeira: Shut it hakari!

Raine: Yana! Remember the phrase "keep it a secret!"?

Yana: Oh yea!

Raine: Oh sweet Isis! Oh and by the way did you get our e-mail? YOu might want to read it if you did..... we found out what's going on with Yeira and you know who!

Yana:Poor Yami! He'll be crushed!

Raine: Would you just SHUT UP!

Yana: OK OK OK!
 Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 21, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
JC: You have to continue!
Kathrine: This is the second story I've read where something bad actually happens to Tristan! You can't just leave it like this!
JC: You are a very articulate writer. Love how you've had lemons or implied 'acts' in every chapter.
Kathrine: That's just how lots of adults are when they're in love probably. Have to be in each others' pants 24/7.
JC: Can't wqit for the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 12, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yeira: Ok well, that was interesting.

Yana: You're telling me!

Raine: I loved it as usual. It just came as a shock to Yeira mostly because of what I do to her in my sequel to Past. *snickers*

Yeira: That's NOT funny Raine!

Yana: Yes it is!

Raine: Well I finally started the final chappie to Past!

Yana: YAY!

Yeira: It's about time!

Raine: Yeah, yeah.

Yeira: Well I have to go run the club! BYE!

Raine:BYE!

Yana: BYE! Oh and now I know NOT to tempt Dragon into doing anything!

Raine: Thank the gods!
 Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 06, 2003 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yana and Yeira: *surprised* Our brothers are MARRIED!!!

Fire: Oh calm down it's only fiction!

Yeira: Ok I'm calm, but I have to say Mokuba is getting CUTE!

Yana: Oh gods!

Fire:Well at least Yugi is taller!

Yana: Hey! There's tall genes in our family! I'm almost as tall Seto!Only an inch shorter!

Yeira: Same here!

Fire: Whatever.*sighs*

Yeira: Well it was great Dreamer and Dragon! I can't wait to read the rest! And this time I promise not to get mad!

Fire and Yana: GOOD!

Fire: I agree with Yeira!It was great! My next chappie is almost all thought out. I just need to think of a beginning.

Yana: Well that's good!

Yeira: Not for you.
 Reviewed By: Yathtallar Infinity [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 03, 2003 13:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice! It's pretty good that they've got conflict; things going well never really make for an interesting story. Too bad for the charas, eh? Sucks to be you guys! ^_^ Anyhow, it's pretty cool how Tristan's turning all Seto-ish... I mean, how did people THINK he got that way, being born like it? Very interesting with the attempts at producing scandals. I can only imagine what Bakura is going to do to that lady, and I can almost pity her.... almost. *Gives Bakura a flamethrower, hand crossbow with poisoned bolts, and a whip* >=)
 Reviewed By: Mineko and her Yami!  On: April 30, 2003 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mineko: WHAT?! *sob* Only... *sob* one... *sob* chapter and... *sob* a... *sob* prolugue?! Nooo... *sob*
Yami M.: Hush; it'll be okay; I'm sure there'll be a new chaper sooner or later...
Mineko: *chokes in mid-sob* You're being... nice? I've lost it!
Yami M.: Well, yes, I've been meaning to talk to you about that...
Mineko: *breaths sigh of releif* Phew, and here I thought I was stuck in a nightmare or something... YOU'RE GONNA GET IT!
Both: *Catfight*
Yami M.: Mwuhahahaha... Anyway, I think I speak for both my hikari and myself when I say WRITE MORE! You HAVE to!
Mineko: *suddenly jumps up and gets her yami in a headlock* Alright already; you're being overdramatic. Anyway, I guess there's nothing to do but check every hour or so... *sigh*
 Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 30, 2003 03:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
JC: WE love this fic so far!!
Kathrine: I want Yami tyo send the bitch of a reporter to the Sgadow Realm orgive her to my 'Kura!!
JC: Why so harsh?
Kathrine: She's screwing with their lives and relationships! Only I get to do that!
JC: Okay... Well, we like how this is going and can't wait for the next chapter! A LEMON is the first chapter with definitely get you brownie points with us too.
Kathrine: Keep up the GREAT work!
 Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 29, 2003 10:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: My, my, Yugi's a little sex machine, isn't he?
Karen: Mmmmm, that was... nice
LD: * snickers * Oh, she is as good as gone.
Karen: Humph, I am not. I think Bakura should kill the damn reporter. Trying to make my bishie's lives a living hell.
LD: Tisk, tisk, so violent. Isn't that my job?
Karen: Grrrr. Ok, I'm calm.
LD: Bring on the torture!
 Reviewed By: MJ  On: April 29, 2003 08:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this one better than the first one..maybe because I can relate to the workaholics of the world.

I agreed with Bakura..someone needs to die..MMWWHAHHAAAA
 Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 26, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
JC: I'm gonna kill someone Pulls out shotgun that says, 'Omae o Korosu' on the side. Shhh... I'm a huntin' me a bandit. *Lets out Elmer Fudd laugh*
Kathrine: No more Looney Tunes for you. *JC is already gone* Oh well, this was great. Love the seme Yugi and uke Seto. Been dying for one of those. *Grins* I love how you have Keith abusing Joey and then acting like it was the drugs that did it. Proves that not all people do bad things because of the 'high' their on. And...*Turns to see JC return with blood all over her* What happened? Did you kill Keith?
JC: Nah, this is Joey's blood. It was all over the floor and I was trampled by the fans beating on Keith and him with frying pans. I got up and ended up with Joey's blood sticking to me. But now, I'm going to clean off.
Kathrine: Leave the clothes, I'll put them in the collection with my clothing covered in the blood from GW and RW characters.
JC: What? No way, that's sick. *Runs off to bathroom*
Kathrine: Good she's gone again. Now, we think that Keith should fuck up and Joey runs off without thinking. That way someone can find him and then Joey can be all protective of Keith and everything can go even farther down the drain. Joey needs to be hurt really bad or something. I happen to enjoy torturing the poor emotionally disoriented blonde. ^_^ Can't wait for next chapter.
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