| "Stronger Than Before" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 29, 2003 11:21 CST
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:: Hands Lexi a new plushie :: There sweetie. ::: Smacks Tristian ::: if I was Joey, I might do worse
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Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh im still reading this story and it's very amazing! This is like the most wonderful lemon story i have ever read in my entire life! I hope you keep continuing!Its great! ^_^
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 25, 2003 12:08 CST
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Good Going Joey!!! :: Hands Lexi a puppy plushie :: There you go sweetheart
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 25, 2003 11:44 CST
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:: Slaps Joey on shoulder:: Think of Lexi!!!
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Reviewed By: SplitPersona On: November 23, 2003 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kathrine: *song-song voice* Oooh, we know something's going to happen. JC: It's sooo obvious. Everything is getting really good in their lives so something has to be done to fuck everything upand put Joey in a bad position. Kathrine: You've been doing it all through the story. JC: And we love how you added to citrus in here. I just love citrus punch. Kathrine: Next, time we get Lemonade. *smirks* We can't wait. JC: And it is just tooo ADORABLE, that Lexi seems so attached to Bakura. She calmed down just because she was sleeping with his pillow! *Awwwws* Kathrine: Did you just put 'adorable' and 'Bakura' in the SAME sentence?! I knew it could be done! JC: *_* OKay... We will be waiitng diligently for next chapter because we know that something is going to happen. ~_^ Oh, the drama. *sighs happily*
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Reviewed By: FushigiHikari12 On: November 20, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* NOOO!! JOEY!!...^^; heh sorry...got a little caught up in the moment...But I wanted to let you know that this fic is absolutely amazing! I've never seen one with this storyline before that doesn't have pointless sex or character bashing, so I'm way impressed. Please keep up the great work!!
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Title: Funny!
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a great story! I like how Joey and Kaiba were having sex. It was hilarious. Im sorry but i only read your proglogue and Chapter 1. I dont have time anymore. I promise ill read your story tomorrow! I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY~^_^
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 15, 2003 12:41 CST
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:: Hands Authors a very wicked looking knife :: Dont know if you can use that, but can I have her in a room for 2 minutes :: Picks up a baseball bat :: That's all it will take for me
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Title: BLOOD LUST BAKURA!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: That was a great chapter. Kathrine: More of a swelling of the plot than action. JC: Yeah, like the 'tension' between Joey and Tristan. Kathrine: Gods, please PLEASE let Bakura kill that Knowles bitch! WE'LL DO ANYTHING IF YOU DO!! JC: Gods, I would just love to see what Marik and Bakura could do to her together. They're both such psychos. Kathrine: Great chapter. And you've got me falling for Lexi. Very strange seeing as I would rather bleed to death from my feet than have a child of our own. JC: I knew she'd come around. NO ONE ESCAPES THE CHIBI KAWAIINESS!!!! Kathrine: Yeah...whatever. Can't wait for next chapter. Definitely looking forward to the new scent of the day, lemon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: November 08, 2003 06:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, i know..well, you were asleep and I was on mmorg and decided 'Holy Poop on a stick! I better review!' Awww........HORRAY FOR CHIBIS!!!!Lexi and Justin are so cute! 'Lexi nee a papa........' OO! *SQUISH* This was a cute update, babe. *hugs Joe-be plushies*
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 07:09 CST
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Very good as usual. The Tristan /Seto bound sounds like an interesting twist. Lexi is addorable and Justin sounds like a chibi Seto.
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Reviewed By: Kysarin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unfortunately I can't give more than 10 on the enjoyment factor. Doh. Seriously though, hurry up and get to Lexi!! You're driving me insane. I'm going to have to write something with a plot and leave EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER with the cliff-hanger of all cliffhangers for revenge. *goes back to re-read the YamixYugixKaiba lemons*
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Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kathrine: YEAH!!!! This is such a great story. JC: We'd actually forgotten about it for a while, almost lost interest. Kathrine: Guess it's because we've been searching for other Anime fics. But then we come back and I find that we missed out a whole LOT! JC: It's good that Joey is getting better and I love how Otogi fits into all of this with Master Kiotou. It's just perfect. Kathrine: And I like how their adopting children with physical disorders. JC: Yeah, we've always wanted to be able to adopt a child we could help with problems like those. Kathrine: Justin seems like a great kid and in a way a mix between Seto and us. Seto's Japanese, we're African (from our Dad) and we have the same light sensitivity disorder. JC: That's just cool. We've never ofund someone's OC that we could link to ourselves until now, even if he is just four. Kathrine: We hope that everything works out for you though with you 'withdrawal'. Take the time you need to work it out before coming back to writing. Either that or the stress will definitely get to you. JC: Wishes for the best!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww that was such a sweet chapter. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: obsessed_animegurl On: October 23, 2003 22:03 CDT
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omg i absolutely love this fic! please keep up the great work!!!
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