"The New DBZ" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan On: May 18, 2003 18:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Update soon! Just some advice: Take your story a little slower. I like a little suspense. Other than that, great job! |
Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 21:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE NOW!!! |