| "Strange Duet" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 01:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want more. Great story, but where are the updates
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Title: Neko_Chaos
Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Frustration! I really like this fanfic and I wish that there was more chapters to it. It is wonderfully written, and I was on the edge of my seat for a V/G lemon the whole time... but Vegita never woke up! Sigh... maybe one day you'll finish it or add another chapter...and on that day, oh how happy I'll be!
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 10, 2004 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoo, great work. ~.^ Your writing style is kind of quirky and fun, and I like it. Oh, and Machia is one of the few original characters that is actually both believable and likeable. ^_^ Still, he'd better keep his goddamn hands off Vegeta!
*pokes Goku in the arm for being such a sweet, dirty little thing* XD Can't wait for the future chapters, I want to know how Vegeta managed to kill Frieza... |
Reviewed By: Ginia On: August 22, 2003 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am so glad to see a new chapter here! Poor confused Goku and a yummy - I mean 'helpless' wounded prince... what a nice combination!
Looking forward to more!!! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 13:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooooooooh. The Kiss. XD Yes, discover your heritage, Goku! Whooooo!
So nice to see he's actually TRAINING Gohan now.
Wounded Vegeta. =purrrs= Always a way to tug my heartstrings. |
Reviewed By: Rebs On: May 01, 2003 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting fic. I really hope you update soon 'cause I just got to know what is gonna happen when Vegeta wakes up.... |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 01:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can see that you're a bit new at this, but I must say that I'm enjoying this fic. Kitty is funny and yet poignant: I can see his point, but he also needs to leave our boys alone!
I liked the bits about the Briefs' inability to recognize their visitor as an alien instead of a cat. Chichi was disposed of a bit too quickly, but I don't really miss her. No one else seems to either, though, including Gohan, who probably should be.
I also didn't expect Vegeta to show up wounded -- that was a nice twist.
The scene with Goku pouncing on Vegeta in his hospital bed was both unexpected and great.
Keep working on this! I have noticed your style improve just over those three chapters. More detail would be good, and some atmosphere, but I think this is progressing very well. |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: July 15, 2003 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I absolutly luv the story, its great! I cant wait to see what happens when vegeta wakes up!!!
write again very soon please |
