| "5 Princes, 4 Assasins, a General, and a Kip" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 09:14 CST
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I just started reading this. It is really good. Hope you finish it and not leave it hanging like some people. ^_~ Can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: March 20, 2005 14:05 CST
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i love it!! poor kip! and even though i love ran i think heero would win beacues he started being the perfect soldier longer than aya started becoming an assassin
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Reviewed By: Niere/Duo On: March 19, 2005 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, a hand to hand fight between Heero and Aya. Both are well trained and determined. I think, however, that Heero would win, due to his enhanced strength. It would be a long, fabulous fight,though. Looking forward to reading about it. This story has been great so far! Niere
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: SnakeMIstress On: March 19, 2005 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEERO!!. though that could be biased because i love heero more than aya *grins* defiantly heero. besides. he's the perfect soldier. he's been trained for everything. he's HEERO. he CAN"T loose. its impossible. great chapter bythe way. can't wait for the next one. ja matte ne till then
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 (Not logged in) On: March 05, 2005 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'm really enjoying the story's idea, but this chapter just confused the Hell out of me. It seems like everything is moving to quickly and it didn't really flow from the last chapter to this one.
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Reviewed By: SapphireGems On: January 17, 2005 03:18 CST
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poor Aya...does he live?? what happened to Heero and Quatre? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 03:48 CST
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Oh, hon... this is coming out wonderfully! I love how you have this going... Please... I gotta know that Heero and Quatre will be alright! I'm worried for them! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: AVID girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do i really have to write style writing? hello this is Ivonne F.! Yes i got the chance to get my own username for your help. Can you please go to Fanfiction.net and read my stories as well! i still have to read your stories and i will be starting off by this one. My user name is 'eveeee90' in Fanfiction.net. And so thank you very much!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (autolog isn't working again) On: November 24, 2004 07:32 CST
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OMG, Duo is going in drag! Yes, this will be hilarious! Which others will be girls as well? I can only guess... Duo, Quatre, Yoji, Omi, and probably Kip... that would round out the five couples I think. Please update soon, I can't wait for this!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 19:53 CST
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Ack! It's Duo torture! The poor boy... he needs to get little Heero to open up more tactfully though... Talk about blunt or what! Please update soon, I need to know that Duo will be safe! Let Heero come to his rescue!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 02:01 CST
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Wow... Normally I don't read crossovers, but this one had definitely caught my eye... Please update this one soon, ok? I'm really enjoying all the confusion and mental chaos you have going, and the pairings are pretty good too! I see you haven't touched this in a while, so hopefully I'll help to spur on the update!
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Reviewed By: DeathGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story. Update soon, please. Rock On!!!! A.B.C (Always be cool)^_~*
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Reviewed By: whaaat the... On: July 03, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
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1. Commas are GREAT punctuations to use. 2. SPELL CHECK is also a very useful tool. 3. To attract more readers, you should probably fix your summary, too, since many people tend to avoid fics that don't have good grammar/spelling. 4. I don't know if you meant to do this really, but Trowa is extremely out of character in the 1st two chapters (the only ones I read). Honestly, would he ever use the word "weird" or so publicly announce "my Quatre"?
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Reviewed By: Tashia On: June 19, 2004 20:19 CDT
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i like the story i hope u finish it soon its so cool
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Reviewed By: Codename: Mastermind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bah, don't worry about it. I WOULD like to see how you've thrown all the ideas together.. o_O ^_^;
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