"Don't laugh" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 17:18 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The story is so cute so far, please update soon! I'll be waiting! ^_^!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 18:25 CST Comment/Review: Y havent u updated yet?!?!?!? DANG YOU!!!!!!
|
Title: Acire Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 15:30 CDT Comment/Review: What a great story you must continue ASAP.... uhh start with either Yugi or Joey...How dare you say you like Ryou torture!!!!!! Evil you! Anywayz please continue.
|
Reviewed By: Tsubasa_lover On: June 29, 2004 23:37 CDT Comment/Review: Oh you big meanie! not letting me choose Ryou. Please write more and Start with seto or joey pwease^_^ i love your story anywayz
|
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lair On: September 30, 2003 17:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i ALWAYS turn up the radio wen i hear that song.i think you should start wit yugi.pleez write sum mor soon!
|
Reviewed By: Pooka228 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 18:44 CDT Comment/Review: I liked it. Can you do Yugi first, Plleeeease? |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: May 29, 2003 00:03 CDT Comment/Review: Wow...this is so good...and sooooo very sad! ^_^ PLEASE DO MORE! Just start with Yuugi I guess..whatever, I don't really have a preferance. Btw...WHAT do you mean you love Ryou torture?!!?!!?! How can you say that! Ryou-chan is the bestest kawaiiest hikari in the whole world! ^-^ Gomen...I'm gushing. Sooooo UPDATE REALLY SOON PLEASE! Arigato! Ja ne! ^_~
P.S. This will be Yaoi, yes?? I hope so! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 18:46 CDT Comment/Review: This is really good. This story could go in any direction. Write more soon. |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 16:50 CDT Comment/Review: this is a good fanfic so far, I really enjoyed rading it. Te song in the proluge fits well with the story iself, however I do like the storry as a whole. I think yu houd go in order start with yami and yugi and work yur wa through there. I men thats how its turning out inthe past two chapters and it makes pefect since. but thats only ne person's oppion. |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 17:00 CDT Comment/Review: pretty sad, i mean that in a good way! really. having ryou, yugi, and joey hav problems and seto having problems are really cool. update it more, please this fic has great potential! |