| "Bed-side Manner V 2.0" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Wind Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 12:57 CDT
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Now I wanna run over a cactus... ... This was realy awesome, and I thought it was better than the first one. But the first one was really good, too. This one was funny, which added to the reason I liked it better. You're a really great author... Authoress... whatever... >>;; I'm off to go visit my cousin is texas just to run over a cactus... So... Ja ne! ^^
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Reviewed By: Kasianne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 02:08 CDT
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I like both versions. This one is just as good, and the characterization is still amazing.
I was laughing out loud at some of the humourous parts...
Ah, the trials and tribulations of Vash and Nicholas....
Man, that bed thing really WOULD happen to them...*giggle*
-k. |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 17:31 CDT
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Hey, Ping. That was wonderful!! As story-telling, I like it better than version one. The emotions are very well done and I began to see the motives driving the characters. It was a very satisfying read. About three quarters of the way down, I was anticipating a TBC not an OWARI. If I'm disappointed in anything about your story, that's the only thing. It didn't feel long at all to me. It felt short and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters. Flashbacks would be great. Howsaboutit? Your muse is breaking free of the chrysalis. Let it fly!!!Let your story take wings!!!! |
