| "Father, Mother, Lover II" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Skysnake13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!!!!!! finally, things are getting happy for ryou. i hope every thing goes well. and i hope bakura and marik are going to come out ok too, as i am very,very fond of them |
Reviewed By: Tanisha On: June 25, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved ur story,Please tell me when you're gonna update. |
Reviewed By: Tanisha On: June 25, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved ur story,Please tell me when you're gonna update. |
Reviewed By: The Red Witich On: June 23, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i said the wrong song when i wrote last. the song is hand me down by matchbox20. sorry 'bout that |
Reviewed By: The Red Witch On: June 23, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you the begining of the first father,mother,lover....
well i found the perfect song for it.it's called downfall bi matchbox20. i just listened to it. its perfect for your story. i love your book.(glad you changed the ending i was never going to read anything like that again) but now i love it. keep writting. its perfect. |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wehey!!!! You're putting up a revised ending for this fic. I was so pissed off at the end about them dying that I had overruled all that I had stood for in the world of fanfiction.
Yami: What's that?
I refused to review... *looking very psychopathic* That's right I'm ashamed cos I review every single fic that I read at least once but when I read that ending I was ready to seek the author tear out his intestines and beat him over the head with it... ^___^ but considering that your putting up a revised ending I'll just scratch all that above... Make it happy... or else....
Bakura: She means it you know? She's in her pre-menstrual period so she can kill anyone and only get off with a caution... *sinister music...* |
Reviewed By: Silvia Sci Fi On: June 06, 2003 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This time I'm liking, congratulations...keep writing...PLEASE!
I'm suffering...you are cruel...but I like it...pretty much :P |
Reviewed By: MalikLover On: June 06, 2003 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shock*I didn't know you wrote fanfics on mediaminer! (Oh, and this is karlawong, the weird one who emailed you) That is so FREAKIN GOOD! Poor Ryou... I didn't read the other first part, but I'm not confused. Continue writing! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad. pretty good, but... ahh, going back into that... well, if it meants good lemons... i guess its alright. i think i like this little twist... its just very fusturating to see how silly ryou-chan is... I hope this isn't going to be too long. |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon of Egypt On: May 27, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
RD:RD here nice ficcy but WHY RYOU WHY LEAVE SOMETHING AS WONDERFUL AS U HAVE I MEAN DONT U UNDERSTAND
Ryou:understand what
Yami:ya if u know something pls enlighten us
Bakura:indeed wench tells something we dont know already
Yugi:im kinda curious so can u tell us ::puppy dog eye::
RD::sighs:: alright but just for u yugi but basically i know u two LOVE ryou and believe me when i say that there is nothing more precious then the life of a child who are the next step to achieving prosperty by seeing were we the adults went wrong and fixing it right WD/White dragon
WD:right no one should hurt innocence nor should ryou think its better the causing trouble for those u care for cause we all must take the good with the bad or how else are we going to have spiritual balance or even peace in the way of karma wich by the way is highly strong in the good side so ryou deserves happiness in his life right RD
RD:right Karma always plays a role in life and if Yugi and Ryou dont deserve a bounty of good Reactions for their Karma then i dont know who does pure and simple
Ryou,Yugi,Yami,and Bakura: O.O wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RD,WD ^____^ JA NE |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow another good chapter can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lil Kitten On: May 05, 2003 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
KAT: GRRRR BITCH ASS HINDA, FUCIING HATE HIM!!!! HE SUCKS MAGER ASS!!!
Rose: O.o o....k, hikari, i thought u wanted a better ending??
K: I DO, BUT HONDA'S BEING A BITCH ASS GAY MOFO!!!!!
R: o...k, plz continue, just make it so honda doesnt rape or hurt Ryou, or else my hikari's gonna be so piised off it wont even be the least bit funny
K: IM ALREADY PISSED OFF, BUT IF HONDA TOUCHES MY RYUO, HE WILL PAY!!!!! I WILL FUCKING KILL HIM!!! AND THE 2 PPL WHO PLAY HIS VOICE!!! ( both english and japanese voices ) PLZ FINISH!!! JUST DONT LET HIM HURT MY RYOU! *breaks into sobbs*
R:*wispers to author* shes very emotional about Ryou, Yugi and their Yamis(even if they arent the yamis in a ficy)
KAT* Still sobbing*AISHITERU RYOU!! DONT LET HIM HURT U!!!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: * pouts * I thought you said this would be a happy ending.
LD: More than one chapter, baka.
Karen: It doesn't seem very happy right now. * sigh * I would like to see this turn out well for Yami, Bakura, Ryou, and Yugi.
LD: Personally, I like that they all died in the last one...
Karen: Brat. I still want a happy ending!
LD: And I want to see where this goes with Honda * snickers * A happy ending and you still aren't done torturing them! Good stuff. |
Reviewed By: NIta On: May 03, 2003 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN YOU!!!!!!!!!!
THIS THING RULES!!!!
.......can i bare you children? |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is bettert then them all dieing. can't wait for the next chapter. |
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