| "Father, Mother, Lover II" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you, I certainly liked this ending better! Keep writing, you always do such a beautiful job of it! *sigh* It's so nice to see that Bakura and Ryou had finally gotten together... *grin*
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Reviewed By: Shadow from AFF.net On: March 05, 2004 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How many lives must you ruin??? ne way thanks for writing this i love it much better than the first ending!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Karia On: October 02, 2003 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Sorry, I have never read this story out of all of yours. So, I started reading last month and I love it!! *drools* I just love Ryou/Bakura pairing! Hey, since you done soo many fictions about Ryou, how about trying some else? Okay okay, it seems like i don't like your stories but I DO love them all, just want something different like other anime. I like Kurama/Hiei pairing from yu yu hakusho...and you don't have to read that. Please continue you Ryou Bakura Saga! ^_^
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones~ On: September 27, 2003 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice!!! We loved this fic on ffnet, and were so sad when it was deleted!!! glad you reposted though!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: al On: September 25, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwww the first one was good too. i usually don't read revised versions of death stories since they usually just change the last chapter.
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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great ending I love the first story even though it was sad endding and I love this one. keep up the stories
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Reviewed By: this is bakurasgirl On: September 14, 2003 13:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
GO BAKURA! *hugs RYou in protctive mode* |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 11:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gonna cry!!!!!! This is so hhhhhhhhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrtttttttttttt wwwwwwwaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrmmmmmmmmmiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggg!!!!! Ahem... anyway... no witty repartee today just continue!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Skysnake13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!!!!!! finally, things are getting happy for ryou. i hope every thing goes well. and i hope bakura and marik are going to come out ok too, as i am very,very fond of them |
Reviewed By: Tanisha On: June 25, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved ur story,Please tell me when you're gonna update. |
Reviewed By: Tanisha On: June 25, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved ur story,Please tell me when you're gonna update. |
Reviewed By: The Red Witich On: June 23, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i said the wrong song when i wrote last. the song is hand me down by matchbox20. sorry 'bout that |
Reviewed By: The Red Witch On: June 23, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you the begining of the first father,mother,lover....
well i found the perfect song for it.it's called downfall bi matchbox20. i just listened to it. its perfect for your story. i love your book.(glad you changed the ending i was never going to read anything like that again) but now i love it. keep writting. its perfect. |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wehey!!!! You're putting up a revised ending for this fic. I was so pissed off at the end about them dying that I had overruled all that I had stood for in the world of fanfiction.
Yami: What's that?
I refused to review... *looking very psychopathic* That's right I'm ashamed cos I review every single fic that I read at least once but when I read that ending I was ready to seek the author tear out his intestines and beat him over the head with it... ^___^ but considering that your putting up a revised ending I'll just scratch all that above... Make it happy... or else....
Bakura: She means it you know? She's in her pre-menstrual period so she can kill anyone and only get off with a caution... *sinister music...* |
Reviewed By: Silvia Sci Fi On: June 06, 2003 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This time I'm liking, congratulations...keep writing...PLEASE!
I'm suffering...you are cruel...but I like it...pretty much :P |
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