| "Pepsi" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: August 12, 2005 20:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it!!! yay sore to be back of ayas!!!! yummm pepsi LEMON hehehehhe muahhahaha
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Reviewed By: Inori_Sakura On: December 27, 2003 14:25 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic was so totaly Heavnly-Hentai-Smut. AISHTERU!! Ja ne tomodachi-chan!
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Reviewed By: Codename: Mastermind [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whooo! Good writing mixed with a lemon-filled plot.. what more can we ask for? Great job! |
Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 10:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sugoi! I don't even drink Pepsi, but I'm going to the store to get some right this instant! Very nice, very nice indeed. Only complain is that we didn't get a little longer description of Aya's mouth on the oh-so-symbolic Pepsi bottle, but I'm sure my immagination will more that make up for that. Well done! |
Reviewed By: lituska_silvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 10:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah lemons... I love lemons ^_^ they are such a pleasure to write ne? and this one was great, all spicy and featuring my fave pair of all time! ^_^
Nicely done and I like the premise behind the title ;)
ps: am i the only one who think Vanilla Coke tastes like a vanilla float? |
