"Watch Me Shine Chapter 15" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Tk10485 On: July 26, 2003 17:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is one of if not the best story I have read. Plz continue I beg of you. I have read the whole story so far including your notes today and I agree that this is your story and should be writen the way you want it to be. Also to all the people who are flaming Serenitas you can go *uck yourselves. All hail Serenitas queen os Sailor Moon fanfics!!! |
Reviewed By: moongoddess101 On: May 11, 2003 12:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh p;ease make helios fuck serena good. i know he is a bad guy. but it would look good. when he fuck her she get prengant. but it is not rini but chibi-chibi. she is a good girl and realy powerful just like her mother. oh when she prengant chibi-chibi comes from the futurn and tells how the baby she is having. please write this.
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