| "One Way Street" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raine: Hey! Sorry I didn't review earlier! I was busy taking care of my cousin! But it was great as usual!
Yeira: It's fun watching other people being tortured!
Yana: YEAH!
Raine: Say that while you girls can!
Yana: OH NO!!
Yeira: Save me Yami!
Raine: Well that's a first. She's asking Yami for help instead of riding her motorcycle!
Yeira: I'll ignore that!
Yana: Well Raine finally started the new Past chappie! Yeah finally!
Raine: I had some serious writer's block!
Yeira: *sarcastically* Sure! |
Reviewed By: Skysnake13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is a really great story. i've never seen the tristan/seto pairing before. keep going, keep going! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2003 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Raine: Good as usual!
Yana: Ha ha Seto! Ha ha Tristan!
Yeira: Oh no! Who gave Dreamer the Pixie Sticks?!
Raine: This won't end well. |
Reviewed By: super_jm (to lazy to log in) On: May 09, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting very interesting can't want for the next chatper |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raine: It's coming along great! It's really good!
Yana: Yeah it is!
Yeira: Poor Joey!
Yana: Oh sweet Isis! God damn Yeira!
Yeira: F you Motou!
Raine: Well this isn't getting any better! Yeira hates Yana and Yana is dyning Yeira as her yami! HELP! I can't stand it anymore! |
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