| "TKO- Total Knock Out" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: saky On: October 20, 2008 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing story. It really made me feel like I'm in the story going through what all the characters have been through. I do agree that you do need to work on some grammar and style but all in all, I still understood. Keep up the good work!
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Title: watch the dialouge
Reviewed By: Rubymermaid On: August 17, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only suggustion I have is to watch the dialouge. Start a new paragraph every time a new person talks. It helps make things less confusing. Overall thought, this fic is a very original idea and I am looking forward to reading it.
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Reviewed By: PyRo_hottie2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! That was such a wonderful story!! It's... I don't know... all I can say is it was great!! I can't think of anyway else to discribe it. *cuddles Zell plushie* I luv Zell ^^ plus I'm a die hard SeiferxZell fan... anyways, just wanted to say it was great and *whispers* will there be a sequal? *pouts* pwease?? *puppy dog eyes*
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