| "A Great Relationshp" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: ??? On: October 24, 2003 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man!! What was that! It made no sense at all!! Please get someone to edit your chapters.
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: ??? On: October 21, 2003 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please explain the story. And learn some grammar. Spelling might help, too.
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Title: WTF !?
Reviewed By: Disgruntled Teen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
What the hell was that? There was hardly a story to that, and there were so many grammar mistakes. If you make more chapters, make sure that they make sense.
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Reviewed By: dfdfdfdfdfd On: June 04, 2003 08:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
it is confusing aand hard to follow |
Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: May 20, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is jumping around everywhere is there even a plot to this story it's like you mixed 3 stories into 1 and i hope the next chapter you do focuses on 1 or 2 but at seperate times not mixing up everywhere. |
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