| "A Great Relationshp" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
Title: ...*sob*
Reviewed By: Me On: August 23, 2005 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read some pretty lame stories...but damn!!! Who the hell was talking?! Where was the plot?! I only gave you ones because the negative numbers weren't avilible...damn I gotta go read a decent fic
|
Reviewed By: teh_seth On: July 13, 2005 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know, theres this interesting thing called the english language. in the right hands, its a powerful tool. in yours, it is confusing as all fuck. i was lost 10 lines into this story. im sure somewhere deep inside you there is a talent for literature. until you find it, however, you should not go within thirty feet of any instrument of writing for the sake of us all.
|
Title: not logged in
Reviewed By: Twilight_Aura On: June 12, 2005 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF.....?! i mean i got the impression that u focused more on comedy....>.>;;; umm...NOT!is there a scipt or plot to this contraption u have cursed us all with?to the fuck with the people who asked u to do better on your next chapter...cause seriously i think your gonna brake down and cry your little crazy eyes out and stay curled up in a tiny ball wonderin why your pussy is wet instead of botherin to revise this and/or update...i go with idea number one T_T i give u two thumbs down and up your ass on this one...and all my ones?i guess im givin u a little glory in your pathetic exuse as an author...they should have a section for sh*t on mediaminer cause i have so many to send there.um thanks for readin this cause i hope it sparks that little hope u have as a...umm...nvrm...u have NO talent as an author sry for my my great flames^^force of habbit^-^
|
Reviewed By: Invisiblegirl On: May 13, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...yeah that really....really...sucked. You should work on your grammar...its hard to figure out who is talking when...thats what "these"< are for! And writing Mimi's name MiMi is just dumb. also have you heard of a thing called paragraphs? By the looks of your story you haven't.
|
Reviewed By: Laurilei On: March 28, 2005 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to be less harsh than the other reviews I read and give you some constructive critism. I thought It was a good plot. But you need to watch your spelling and especially your grammar. Make sure its specified who is talking..It was a bit confusing. t co
|
Title: †-_-†
Reviewed By: †-_-† On: January 11, 2005 22:19 CST
Comment/Review:
That fucking sucked. That's putting it mildly.
|
Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 00:41 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!! T3HT'S MY B-DAY 2!!111!!!!11!!!!11! J00 R ST00PID!!!11!! Go to school and learn grammar and spelling. Then come back and revise this piece of c***.
|
Reviewed By: BlueRag [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice Mimis a slut thats coo laughs nervesly shoot I wanted Koumi I didn't care if Mimi was a slut unless I get some Koumi-lemon or Koumi action cuz! Peace BR..
|
Reviewed By: Lainey On: April 21, 2004 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, and Ayanami-san you're fucked up too.
|
Reviewed By: Lainey On: April 21, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone has their passion, their talent, their own unique gift...WRITING IS NOT YOUR'S! This has to be the most fucked up story I have EVER read. There are no Parentheses or italics. There's no plot. It's horrible. What kind of line is "I wonder why my pussy's wet"? You have the I.Q. of a first grader. (No offense to all you first graders, you can probably write better then this.) I'm so lost in here. I don't even know what's going on. What you need to do is go and crawl back into your fucking hole! You're so dimented.
|
Title: CCCOOOOOOLLLL!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ayanami-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best Digimon Fanfic I've ever read!!!!!!!^_^!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: An Idiot On: March 31, 2004 20:39 CST
Comment/Review:
So, where's the next chapter? I'd like to see what the next chapter contains. And a little more detail would be good too.
|
Title: I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE WHOSE CONFUSED, YOU ARE TOO!
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ok, were you drunk when you wrote this story. I've never been so lost in a fic before. You have to stick to one thing. Maybe you have ADD, or a short attention span. Or that diesease when you just fall asleep out of the blue. Just stop writing for your and our sake. Your story is so bad people review to tell you how bad it is. THAT'S SAD! Sorry but no gold star for you buddy! GIVING YOU A 1 IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT! IT SUCKS, JA NE!
|
Reviewed By: a goat in a moat, with a boat On: December 11, 2003 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
good effort. You should start off with a main plot. Go with that for a while and than maybe you can work in side plots. needs some revision. but more importantly... who's got the crack?
|
Title: =S
Reviewed By: confoosed.. On: November 08, 2003 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!?! get a beta!!
|
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
