| "A Great Relationshp" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: †-_-†
Reviewed By: †-_-† On: January 11, 2005 22:19 CST
Comment/Review:
That fucking sucked. That's putting it mildly.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 00:41 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!! T3HT'S MY B-DAY 2!!111!!!!11!!!!11! J00 R ST00PID!!!11!! Go to school and learn grammar and spelling. Then come back and revise this piece of c***.
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Reviewed By: BlueRag [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Nice Mimis a slut thats coo laughs nervesly shoot I wanted Koumi I didn't care if Mimi was a slut unless I get some Koumi-lemon or Koumi action cuz! Peace BR..
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Reviewed By: Lainey On: April 21, 2004 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, and Ayanami-san you're fucked up too.
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Reviewed By: Lainey On: April 21, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone has their passion, their talent, their own unique gift...WRITING IS NOT YOUR'S! This has to be the most fucked up story I have EVER read. There are no Parentheses or italics. There's no plot. It's horrible. What kind of line is "I wonder why my pussy's wet"? You have the I.Q. of a first grader. (No offense to all you first graders, you can probably write better then this.) I'm so lost in here. I don't even know what's going on. What you need to do is go and crawl back into your fucking hole! You're so dimented.
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Title: CCCOOOOOOLLLL!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ayanami-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best Digimon Fanfic I've ever read!!!!!!!^_^!!!!!
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: March 31, 2004 20:39 CST
Comment/Review:
So, where's the next chapter? I'd like to see what the next chapter contains. And a little more detail would be good too.
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Title: I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE WHOSE CONFUSED, YOU ARE TOO!
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ok, were you drunk when you wrote this story. I've never been so lost in a fic before. You have to stick to one thing. Maybe you have ADD, or a short attention span. Or that diesease when you just fall asleep out of the blue. Just stop writing for your and our sake. Your story is so bad people review to tell you how bad it is. THAT'S SAD! Sorry but no gold star for you buddy! GIVING YOU A 1 IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT! IT SUCKS, JA NE!
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Reviewed By: a goat in a moat, with a boat On: December 11, 2003 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
good effort. You should start off with a main plot. Go with that for a while and than maybe you can work in side plots. needs some revision. but more importantly... who's got the crack?
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Title: =S
Reviewed By: confoosed.. On: November 08, 2003 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!?! get a beta!!
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Reviewed By: ??? On: October 24, 2003 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man!! What was that! It made no sense at all!! Please get someone to edit your chapters.
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: ??? On: October 21, 2003 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please explain the story. And learn some grammar. Spelling might help, too.
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Title: WTF !?
Reviewed By: Disgruntled Teen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
What the hell was that? There was hardly a story to that, and there were so many grammar mistakes. If you make more chapters, make sure that they make sense.
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Reviewed By: dfdfdfdfdfd On: June 04, 2003 08:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
it is confusing aand hard to follow |
Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: May 20, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is jumping around everywhere is there even a plot to this story it's like you mixed 3 stories into 1 and i hope the next chapter you do focuses on 1 or 2 but at seperate times not mixing up everywhere. |
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