| "The Feathers of a Wing" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: witchhunterR [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great dont stop! please update
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Reviewed By: DreamAnimeKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it alot! I hope to get to read the rest of it someday.
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Reviewed By: DannyKen23 On: August 22, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far |
Reviewed By: Shokaract On: June 13, 2003 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I found it and read it (took me forever, but ok) and I must say I am impressed. I can't wait for more chapters to be installed. This sounds like a good start to what could be a great fanfic series, or miniseries, however you wanna term it.
Shokaract |
Reviewed By: Shaggy On: June 14, 2003 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, I just found and read this fanfic. It's not bad, but not great. First off, I liked the whole Kouryuu fighting the thugs off in the beginning of chapter one, but I am curious to know more about WHY she was being pursued, like have a little more background info on that. And then her rescuer...It'd be cool to know how he dispatched those guys that she was fighting. Did he shoot them? Did he fight them hand-to-hand?
These are just a few questions that came up during it all.
Then, there's the whole point-of-view from just Kouryuu. I think it'd be nice to see the perception from the other pilots and characters surrounding Kouryuu, and maybe go a little in depth on how they see her and relate to her in their own minds. A description of the Gundams would be cool, too, just to flex the descriptive muscles, as it were.
Well, overall this was a good start to something, but it really does leave you wanting more and more by the time you get done with Chapter 2. Juts a few minor criticisms on my part, but then again, I'm something of a perfectionist after all.
PO3 Shaggy |
Reviewed By: Raithowyn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 21:43 CDT
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Thanks wren legacy! I wish more would write some reviews for me! then i would have more of a will to get to the interesting stuff. Please please please give me some reviews guys! |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 10:59 CDT
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Interesting, please write more soon! ^_~ What you have so far is attention getting and i want to see what happens. Until then, Ja ne! |
