| "Is it Shame or is it Desire?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Wanna SEE!!!
Reviewed By: LMK LoveMeKags and Co Productions [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wanna see more! I swear. I love this story. Does Goku accept him? What happens?
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's a shame that more people don't review this considering how many have visited. I like where the ideas is going and I hope you continue this. I agree with the prior reviewer, that it's interesting to see Vejita think about the 'woman's' feelings. I know it's been awhile but I hope to write more.
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Title: Is it shame or is it desire?
Reviewed By: Roxanne On: April 26, 2004 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I love yaoi fics especially the ones that pertain to Vegeta. I didnt notice any spelling and grammer mistakes which is a good thing because so many people dont seem to know the concept of spell checking their work and I get put off by those fics. There are quite a few Vegeta ang Goku fics, but not many where Vegeta actually cares what Bulma thinks. I liked the fic but I dont know I think it was lacking a bit. It could have had a little bit more angst or Vegeta could have gently pulled Goku in for a kiss after he told him he loved him then blushed and then so on and so forth, but ohter than that it was prety godd so please continue the fic. Thank you, Roxanne (Rdoujima)
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Reviewed By: sake4u2 (not signed in) On: March 11, 2004 18:18 CST
Comment/Review:
hey, nice fanfic i wanna see what happens, a little fast but it's for this story, keep it up ;-P
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