Reviewed By: Larania On: May 15, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now- THIS is an interesting mpreg fic idea! You need to get a spell checker, or something, and your use of language tends to be repetitive. Otherwise, its interesting. |
