| "Alan's Battle Arena" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: kaedee On: August 17, 2004 17:48 CDT
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Could you PLEASE give Dante something to do? PLEASE? PLEASEY_PLEASE_PLEASE???
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Reviewed By: Moka_Only [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 13:27 CDT
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I finished do you think I dont watch a show called Futurama maybe I dont know how to spell it but a place where the supreme court doesn't matter? Multi Ball? Come on might as well add Bender and Fry. It's still funny but I just wanted to point it out.
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Reviewed By: Moka_Only [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 11:25 CDT
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This fic was okay I'm not through reading it but it's okay. The spelling errors are nothing to be tripping about special since the funnyness overshadows it.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 02:04 CDT
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This fic is okay. DO THE 4 DARK MASTERS AGAINST HIEI, KUWABARA, KURAMA, AND YUSUKE OR FEEL MY UNPRESIDENTED WRATH OF GRIZZLY BEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: mmm...
Reviewed By: debohlaty On: April 05, 2004 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The spelling errors! There were too much! But it was funny. i'll give you credit for that. You just need to stop sidelining from the matches.
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:30 CST
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I have a good question to all of you people out there. If you have no reason for flaming Alan then why do you even bother reviewing at all? That's what's wrong with people these days. Anyway I like you story. Do you think you could have the 4 Dark Masters fight Yusuke, Kuwabara, Kurama, and Hiei? That would be something.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Fox 777 On: January 29, 2004 21:55 CST
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Funny as ever. I will be checking for that up date. Go Link!
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Title: kiss my ass
Reviewed By: fuck off On: January 10, 2004 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Title: steak
Reviewed By: T-Bone Scott On: January 10, 2004 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't have a reason.
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Title: Continuing?
Reviewed By: FireEyes Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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When are you gonna put up another chapter on this fic, and more importantly, when are you gonna update the Adv. of Alan and Jamie? I luv that fic very much! Tell me when you update. Also, check out and review my latest fanfic, Meda-Quest, which is up now in the Medabots section! See yah!
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Reviewed By: phantom ?/buckedtoothbunny On: January 01, 2004 16:50 CST
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YAY!!! You actuly read my reveiw!! ^^ I'm so happy !!! I Won't be on the staff anytime soon.^^
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Reviewed By: CShadow Fox777 On: November 11, 2003 18:43 CST
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This was super funny but why did you have to hurt poor Mario? I like Mario. But you sure can make one laugh. Please continue. I like.
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Reviewed By: bucktoothedbunny(flamer) On: November 02, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo! It's a-me a flamer! Dude your plots good,but you need to take a grammer class, or sometin'(yes I'm lecturing you on your grammer and I used slang).You forgot to use pluarls,and crap. AND GET THAT 7TH CHAPTER DONE! But be nice, I'll be on the swtaff soon!:)
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Reviewed By: bucktoothedbunny(flamer) On: October 26, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CALLED RENAMON A HE! I'M GOING TO PERSONALY KILL YOUR RATINGS! Sorry, I hate when that happens (Dumb a** alter ego)well sorry for the low ratings ,but 1:joe is DEAD.2:I HATE TAKATO(mon).and 3: You called Renamon a f**ka** HE. Also be nice I'm gonna be on the staff soon! (MWA-ha-ha-ha):)
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Reviewed By: bucktoothedbunny(flamer) On: October 26, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't escape me Alan...I know where you live(mwa-ha-ha-ha-)At least I think I do,Is it Manhatten? Make a third one and I'll make your grammer rating better. But remember I'll be on the staff soon,so BE NICE!
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