| "Alan's Battle Arena" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: kiss my ass
Reviewed By: fuck off On: January 10, 2004 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Title: steak
Reviewed By: T-Bone Scott On: January 10, 2004 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't have a reason.
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Title: Continuing?
Reviewed By: FireEyes Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
When are you gonna put up another chapter on this fic, and more importantly, when are you gonna update the Adv. of Alan and Jamie? I luv that fic very much! Tell me when you update. Also, check out and review my latest fanfic, Meda-Quest, which is up now in the Medabots section! See yah!
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Reviewed By: phantom ?/buckedtoothbunny On: January 01, 2004 16:50 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY!!! You actuly read my reveiw!! ^^ I'm so happy !!! I Won't be on the staff anytime soon.^^
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Reviewed By: CShadow Fox777 On: November 11, 2003 18:43 CST
Comment/Review:
This was super funny but why did you have to hurt poor Mario? I like Mario. But you sure can make one laugh. Please continue. I like.
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Reviewed By: bucktoothedbunny(flamer) On: November 02, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo! It's a-me a flamer! Dude your plots good,but you need to take a grammer class, or sometin'(yes I'm lecturing you on your grammer and I used slang).You forgot to use pluarls,and crap. AND GET THAT 7TH CHAPTER DONE! But be nice, I'll be on the swtaff soon!:)
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Reviewed By: bucktoothedbunny(flamer) On: October 26, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CALLED RENAMON A HE! I'M GOING TO PERSONALY KILL YOUR RATINGS! Sorry, I hate when that happens (Dumb a** alter ego)well sorry for the low ratings ,but 1:joe is DEAD.2:I HATE TAKATO(mon).and 3: You called Renamon a f**ka** HE. Also be nice I'm gonna be on the staff soon! (MWA-ha-ha-ha):)
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Reviewed By: bucktoothedbunny(flamer) On: October 26, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't escape me Alan...I know where you live(mwa-ha-ha-ha-)At least I think I do,Is it Manhatten? Make a third one and I'll make your grammer rating better. But remember I'll be on the staff soon,so BE NICE!
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Reviewed By: bucktoothedbunny(flamer) On: October 26, 2003 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very original...I'm also a flamer(please someone tell me what that means!),but it's very good and I,ll be on the staff soon, so be nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! // <
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Reviewed By: Plutonian Jacy On: September 01, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
good ficcy! do you mind me asking you to put a battle in it? if you no about yugioh, how about yami bakura against yoshi from mario!??? lol, it would be funny!!! |
Reviewed By: lizie On: August 19, 2003 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fanfiction. people please keep writing toshinden fanfictions. there great. |
Reviewed By: FireEyes Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you decided to continue writing this fic. Also, I'd like to ask, when did Takato learn to drive a bus?! Anyways, I would like to see more.
FireEyes Dragon out!
P.S: If you have the time, could you pleeeease review on my fic! I've only got on review and I need more in order to keep up the story. |
Reviewed By: GogetaSS7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mikey, u r no longer alone! nice fic. if i may say something . . . i would like to c something like Vegeta vs. Ryoko in Chapter 4. (if at all possible) |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 15:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!! Just so you know! Hey, man! How ya doin'?! I'm surprised that there aint more people reading this fic!! You only got ONE review???!!! Thats absurd!!! Well, I hope things turn out better for ya!! See ya'!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..................... |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it!! Mikey likes!! Mikey B23 is impressed!! Keep it up man!! Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......................................
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