| "Junior" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Miko's Sorrow On: March 18, 2005 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there any way possible that you could tell me when you update? I love your story cause is actually HAS A PLOT!!!! Go-freaking-figure. (sorry its just most yaoi has no plot. to me anyway) This gives new meaning to alternate pairings though i like the idea. (and the results obviously) Never have seen it done before. I like the reincarnation deal even if its a bit unbelievable you make it make sense. Its almost like its supposed to be that way. (is it i never really watched/read this anime/manga) if you consider letting me know about the next chapter my e-mail is toxic_sorrow14@sbcglobal.net. (PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LET ME KNOW!! ITS AN AWESOMELY GOOD STORY) arigatou ja ne!
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Reviewed By: AyumeSakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 17:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Great fic! I loved the flashback scenes how the two got together. I can't wait to read more! Update soon! Onegai! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Anon. On: February 06, 2004 02:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything in this fic is excellent. While you need to work a little on grammatical issues, the plot is strong. Who'd've thunk Koenma would get pregnant? I love the YusukexKoenma pairing, and it's so hard to find. Please do us all the favor of updating again as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eewwwwww Hiei and Kuwabara. That is just gross, but everything else is absolutely fabulous and despite what purplechaos says this does not need to be explored in more detail. I get the shivers just from the thought of it I really don't need the mental pictures. Otherwise update soon I'll be waiting. |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 13:39 CDT
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Wait wait wait... I just looked at it again. Hiei and KUWABARA??? Interesting!! This must be explored in more detail! |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 13:37 CDT
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Hey, this is really good! You have some really funny lines in there too, especially:
--“Evil artifacts of spiritual toilet paper? Demonic chickens trying to hold the Ningenkai for ransom?”
--"Yuusuke, the point of the drinking was to NOT remember?"
--You just don't think of a toddler being gay.
What's up w/ Ch. 3? It's all messed up. But yea. Keep writing! Heehehehe great ending w/ Hiei and Kurama. |
Reviewed By: Letta On: May 24, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is really cool. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Anonymous Idiot On: May 24, 2003 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmmm........... good so far... * winks* ( Told ya I'm an idiot....) |
