| "The Mistakes That You Made" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Charlie The Otaku Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you caught my attention with this. I gave you a 10 for Originality/Creativity because this is the first fic I've seen, that I can remember, that heero is a father. And that little girl is so cute.
Not critisizing, just commenting. I like ths story and where your going with it, but the style is a little annoying. You switch the scenes a lot but your not very descriptive. It takes a while for me to guess where they are when you switch the scenes.
Once again, this was not a flame, far be it from me to flam anyone. Just giving my opinion.
Love this story, can't wait for more.
-blyss- |
Reviewed By: that1girl On: June 19, 2003 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your fanfic its very interesting. I think you should write MORE!! I think your storyline is great i would have never thought about this. Heero having a daughter and not with Relena, but i can see that they are getting closer sooooo it would make me so happy if you WROTE MORE!!! i'm on the edge of my seat here::smirks at author::: But honestly i hope you write more of this fanfic. Goodbye....for now::smiles:: |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2003 14:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wren is intriguied. Please write more? Me wants to see what happens! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 21:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohhh, very interesting, can't wait till the next part is out. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 18:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm...Yep! Wren likey very, very muchy! Write more soon! Wren wants to see what happens. *solemn expression* Your story is very well written and me thinks you're belonging on Wren's favorites list. Have a nice day! ~_^ |
