| "white wolf" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: same as always
Reviewed By: SnS On: May 01, 2004 19:07 CDT
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Suboisu:WOW!!! tat was so cool \Sakura:update soon n ryou is sooo cool i can jus imagine him...*dreamy look*/Suboisu:sorry bout me yami she luvs ryou bakura malik marik seto n yugi abandon stories o yea im gettin out o point plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: crystal crittenden On: December 16, 2003 14:21 CST
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Please, update soon?
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Is another great story I've read keep up the good work! and please More chapters ASAP! Thanks Vampire Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: crystal crittenden On: November 30, 2003 13:54 CST
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Please, update soon!?!
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Reviewed By: crystal crittenden On: October 03, 2003 06:09 CDT
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Well, I really did like that chapter. Very cool! I say that Marilk should die maybe when he trys to escape or sacrifices himself to save everone from being killed. You can choose which sounds best. Up date soon,Bye.
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Reviewed By: crystal crittenden On: September 28, 2003 13:28 CDT
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Now that's funny and cool. I really did like chapter 4. And where did you get the idea to have Bakura come back to life dead? I mean that is so cool and mysteries. I like that idea. Please,write an author note and tell me where you got the idea to have Bakura come back to live and if you don't want to tell,that's Ok.So please up date when you have the next chapter up? Because I really do want to find out what happens to Ryou next. Bye.
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Reviewed By: Drazuki On: July 14, 2003 19:30 CDT
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Great job! Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Leona On: July 06, 2003 22:35 CDT
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Oh poor ryou ......i hate bakura right now........anyways i really like it..it was good^^ |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooo!! Bakura!! Please write more! This is good! Is Ry-chan gonna atttack the others? Can he kill Tea first?(no like her)Is Malik gonna be here? Write more so I can stop asking questions! |
Reviewed By: crystal On: June 18, 2003 07:50 CDT
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Very,very cool. I really do like this fic a lot. Can you please have the next chapter up soon? Because I really want to find out what will happen to Ryou. Great job so far. |
Reviewed By: Princess Kitty On: June 02, 2003 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! This was nice! Very enjoyable!! Some of the grammar was messed up, so just spell-check it. I have one question though: why was Yugi being carried on Joey's back? Can't he walk? It just seems a little out-of-character. Otherwise, this was great!! |
