| "Niisan (Older Brother)" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 23:00 CST
Comment/Review:
that was so sad and sweet! me loved it!
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Reviewed By: NiceGirl On: July 01, 2005 23:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was SO sad. It was a nice brotherly love story.I loved it somuch it made me cry.TT__TT
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Reviewed By: Gia On: July 07, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo sweet!!! I feel like crying happily!!! |
Reviewed By: Starpiper On: June 18, 2003 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aiya...this is really good. The spelling and grammer are rather good, which is nice when you consider some of the fics floating around... Both Yuki and Ayame were both pretty much dead on character (though I would think that Yuki would be a little bit more uptight about Kyou seeing him distracted, but seeing as how he was really worried, I guess that could be forgiven)and Shigure's actions are just what one would expect of him. ^^
I really think that you should have gotten *some* kind of recognition in the contests that you entered this in. It's really sweet and heart-pang-inducing.
Hoeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! ^_^V ::Starpiper, off to read more Fruits Basket fics:: |
Reviewed By: qkslvr On: June 03, 2003 12:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gawd...everytime I read a story about Yuki and Ayame's relationship, I end up tearing up. And this is no exception.
This is really good. *thumbs up* |
