| "Tails Playtime" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Triplechaos0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think my brain is hemmeraging now. Seriously, I'm seeing all different colors.*Touches ear and pulls hand away. Sees blood* Yep, see you later folks.*Falls to ground and convulses.*
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Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 23:31 CST
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Mikey I dont think itll come to him, this is really making my day. On second thought, I got an idea, RedDevil7690, I'll aim you my idea. Also, if I wasnt so preoccupied with eating my manwhich I really would die, or better yet, make a chapter on you destroying the world with your bad grammar!! ahahahaha!!! Im such a bastard!!!!
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Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I fear death. Because when I die, my life will flash before my eyes, and I will see this again. |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 21:05 CDT
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Come on. Your other one was sad but this was crap! I can see if your forign and learning to use English or something, but otherwise this is inexcusable! Ill ate you properly when you give me something worht reading. |
Reviewed By: Confuzzled person On: July 13, 2003 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
....Wha?!
I dont
Understad this
Fic so I
Will give it these
Grades above me |
Reviewed By: Kusa On: July 11, 2003 16:52 CDT
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oh my god. 10 years of testicular cancer topped off with gonneriah and siffilus still can't compair to the pain and pure agony i experienced reading this "fic". DUUUUUUDE, you need english lessons, until you can spell and use sentances properly keep your little fantasies of rouge and tails to yourself.
JESUS, look what you have done to me, i was in a good mood and feeling nice and happy, now i feel like shit, thanks for ruining my fic reading experience with this junk.
final word for the love of GOD plz dont write anymore, dont put the world through this kind of pain!!!! |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: July 08, 2003 15:46 CDT
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This is among the sorriest excuses for writing I have seen in quite a while. If it was a joke, it wasn't funny, if you were serious, then this is just sad. There are these things, called paragraphs, please learn to use them. |
Reviewed By: Assholey Person On: July 07, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please listen to your English teacher the next time you see her/him. |
Reviewed By: Reality On: July 06, 2003 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is absolutely nothing good about this writing. Compared to some of the other lemons based on this cartoon, this is a downright disgrace. Not to mention, most people won't even be able to read it without wanting to commit suicide. |
Reviewed By: Shade On: June 23, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooo BADLY written 1 was too good! im trying 2 be nice but... IT WAS THAT CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! soz, but it's true |
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: June 19, 2003 22:26 CDT
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You realy need the learn proper english.If you aks me,you should not have put this up.It looks like a 2 year old did this but I may be wrong they could have done better then this.If I did give you a rating I would be like a -10. Sorry but this sucks. |
Reviewed By: yamispiritofthemillenniumpuzzle2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, but you need to learn how to write English stories. GO TO SCHOOL! |
Reviewed By: hteraj25@yahoo.com On: June 06, 2003 15:48 CDT
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I'm going to be easy on you... no I'm not! This was the sorriest piece of crap i have ever had the displeasure to read it sucked so badly i cant even put up a rating on the thing your score would be so low! learn to spell! then send me another fic and i shall grade accordingly |
Reviewed By: rouge the bat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
this kept my intrest but it was SOO HARD TO READ! but i'm no diffrent. check out gemini the story. it's like a brick. i love where this is going LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! but i think this story turned me illiterate. OH NO I CAN'T READ! oh wait yes i can. next time use periods. that kind not the messy kind(almost forgot the subject matter) sorry for the megaharsh rating but if nobody tells you you'll never know. |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, I AM being easy on you, just because I don't like giving people "1" ratings! I know you're probably a beginner at this...I know, I was in that very same position! Don't sweat it! Just work a bit on your grammer and spelling, and you'll be great!! Mikey B23 out!!!!......... |
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