| "Tails Playtime" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Title: Plot! Wheres the freaking plot!
Reviewed By: shadow_master117 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOookkaaayyy... Sorry but this is quite the challenge to read, it would be a pretty good lemon if you used proper pronunciation and punctuation (especially paragraghs) as every body else says "Listen to your English teacher!"
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Title: Plot! Wheres the freaking plot!
Reviewed By: shadow_master117 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOookkaaayyy... Sorry but this is quite the challenge to read, it would be a pretty good lemon if you used proper pronunciation and punctuation (especially paragraghs) as every body else says "Listen to your English teacher!"
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Reviewed By: person in pain On: January 20, 2005 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude im sorry but u are terible. i really feel for u if your a new writer but until u pay attention in english class u really shouldnt write anything
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Title: WTF?
Reviewed By: hgajoghpoiahg On: November 12, 2004 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, THIS SUCKS! You HAVE to pay attention in English class, it IS the universal language after all...
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Reviewed By: Some dude On: July 02, 2004 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you fuckin' suck. That's all I can say. YOU SUCK.
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Title: that sucked i'm drunk
Reviewed By: violent mage On: May 20, 2004 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was very afraid of that piece there did you get lessons from all the other wannabes? i have a feeling the crap hit the fan on that fic get decent english and maybe you can salvage this thing of pure suckiness looks like red devil or mikey b wrote it or big daddy in disguise xD
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: nokiasama03 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it made me laugh ^^
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Triplechaos0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think my brain is hemmeraging now. Seriously, I'm seeing all different colors.*Touches ear and pulls hand away. Sees blood* Yep, see you later folks.*Falls to ground and convulses.*
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Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 23:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Mikey I dont think itll come to him, this is really making my day. On second thought, I got an idea, RedDevil7690, I'll aim you my idea. Also, if I wasnt so preoccupied with eating my manwhich I really would die, or better yet, make a chapter on you destroying the world with your bad grammar!! ahahahaha!!! Im such a bastard!!!!
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Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I fear death. Because when I die, my life will flash before my eyes, and I will see this again. |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on. Your other one was sad but this was crap! I can see if your forign and learning to use English or something, but otherwise this is inexcusable! Ill ate you properly when you give me something worht reading. |
Reviewed By: Confuzzled person On: July 13, 2003 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
....Wha?!
I dont
Understad this
Fic so I
Will give it these
Grades above me |
Reviewed By: Kusa On: July 11, 2003 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh my god. 10 years of testicular cancer topped off with gonneriah and siffilus still can't compair to the pain and pure agony i experienced reading this "fic". DUUUUUUDE, you need english lessons, until you can spell and use sentances properly keep your little fantasies of rouge and tails to yourself.
JESUS, look what you have done to me, i was in a good mood and feeling nice and happy, now i feel like shit, thanks for ruining my fic reading experience with this junk.
final word for the love of GOD plz dont write anymore, dont put the world through this kind of pain!!!! |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: July 08, 2003 15:46 CDT
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This is among the sorriest excuses for writing I have seen in quite a while. If it was a joke, it wasn't funny, if you were serious, then this is just sad. There are these things, called paragraphs, please learn to use them. |
Reviewed By: Assholey Person On: July 07, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please listen to your English teacher the next time you see her/him. |
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