Title: A Little Something Else
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had no painfully obvious grammatical errors. You had no painfully obvious spelling errors. You also had nothing to seperate this one-shot from all the other one-shots running around the internet. There was a lot of rejected-lover-angst, and then...that was just about it. It wasn't bad, and it wasn't especially good.
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