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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 03:06 CST
Comment/Review:
This was a really good story. :D great job, im gonna go read the sequel.
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Reviewed By: Schwarz tot schwarz das Bloot{not logged in} On: June 01, 2005 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you that rating because as well written and enjoyable as it was...I hated it! Your ending is so sad. Its just so sweet, so fluffy...my gott! It was a wonderful story, with the exception of me bawling my eyes like a baby! Keep up the good work! ~*Peace*~ ^^ Auska
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Reviewed By: Kamekazi On: December 24, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic and its sequel keep up the good work! *^_^*
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Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't realize that you had a new fic out or I would have reviewed it the instant it had come up.
The thing is with this story you could go a lot of
different places and different angles. There is the fact that even though Seifer is not friends with him anymore the other jocks might do something bad to Squall. Like rape him or something. I don't know, this is your story so do
what you want, but that is what it seems like you are leading up to. I also wonder how Zell will react since he and Seifer aren't the best of friends. They seem to have a lot of troubles ahead of them and I can't wait until you write more so I can find out how they are going to face the world. Oh yeah, and when does Squall figure out that Seifer told him "I love you" in Swedish?
That is going to be very interesting. I like the Squall anguish since it is well founded, there is a certain reality to this fic that makes it seem real and I enjoy that a lot. Please write more!
Love ya lots,
Aria Lerendeair |
Reviewed By: Squall Leonhart On: July 30, 2003 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. Keep writing buddy, I want the next update soon. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Madamebutterfly1983 On: July 20, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story for a couple of chapters. I have to agree with everyone else. This is awesome. Keep It Up!!!! |
Reviewed By: Maple On: July 17, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About time you updated this fic. *mock glares* Squall in here is just so adorably vulnerable and cute! A really enjoyable read ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Switch On: July 11, 2003 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When will you update!? *Taps foot expectantly* I'm waiting! :)! I love the story, i just cant seem to tell you enough. Please continue, I want to know how it ends! |
Reviewed By: Stephyyyy On: July 06, 2003 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was soo excitingg i loved itt the grammar was okay and that's bout itt ^_^ continue ASAP |
Reviewed By: Akari On: July 06, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was AWESOME! I luff this fic..hey.. *pokes a couple chapters back* Why swedish? i think seifer looks German ^__________^ Cant wait for moooore. Lookin' forward to ze lemon. ^^ KEEP WRITING...and i'll keep reading. |
Reviewed By: rey On: June 30, 2003 09:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like ur stories, but please make squall
more manly, ok. couse i dont think he can kiss
seifer twice, and they just a friend.
and please write a stories from squall POV. |
Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I loved it and have been waiting forever for you to update! I don't know how many times I have to say that your story is great and to keep it up but I will leave reviews because people are so lazy to do so! I'm writing a SxS fic and I don't even have one review!!! Oh, well. That's my little sad story. You hurry up and continue writing the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel On: June 26, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far and I'm so happy that you're updating almost every day! I can't keep my eyes off of this fic and I love it sooo much. Very good with the story and description so far. I hope you continue soon, but you do that good enough anyway! Later |
Reviewed By: Switch On: June 23, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!! I feel so bad for Seifer, even though he did act like a bastard! But he's sorry and that dumb teacher! AAGGGHHH!!!! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Justin On: June 21, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I really like your ideas and where this story is headed. Although to be honest I think that the story could go without the yaoi but that's my opinion so you don't have to listen to it or not. Anyway I like what you've got going and best of luck to you to continue this story. |
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