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 Reviewed By: Madamebutterfly1983  On: July 20, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story for a couple of chapters. I have to agree with everyone else. This is awesome. Keep It Up!!!!
 Reviewed By: Maple  On: July 17, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
About time you updated this fic. *mock glares* Squall in here is just so adorably vulnerable and cute! A really enjoyable read ^__^
 Reviewed By: Switch  On: July 11, 2003 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
When will you update!? *Taps foot expectantly* I'm waiting! :)! I love the story, i just cant seem to tell you enough. Please continue, I want to know how it ends!
 Reviewed By: Stephyyyy  On: July 06, 2003 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The story was soo excitingg i loved itt the grammar was okay and that's bout itt ^_^ continue ASAP
 Reviewed By: Akari  On: July 06, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was AWESOME! I luff this fic..hey.. *pokes a couple chapters back* Why swedish? i think seifer looks German ^__________^ Cant wait for moooore. Lookin' forward to ze lemon. ^^ KEEP WRITING...and i'll keep reading.
 Reviewed By: rey  On: June 30, 2003 09:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like ur stories, but please make squall
more manly, ok. couse i dont think he can kiss
seifer twice, and they just a friend.
and please write a stories from squall POV.
 Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2003 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was great! I loved it and have been waiting forever for you to update! I don't know how many times I have to say that your story is great and to keep it up but I will leave reviews because people are so lazy to do so! I'm writing a SxS fic and I don't even have one review!!! Oh, well. That's my little sad story. You hurry up and continue writing the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel  On: June 26, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far and I'm so happy that you're updating almost every day! I can't keep my eyes off of this fic and I love it sooo much. Very good with the story and description so far. I hope you continue soon, but you do that good enough anyway! Later
 Reviewed By: Switch  On: June 23, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!! I feel so bad for Seifer, even though he did act like a bastard! But he's sorry and that dumb teacher! AAGGGHHH!!!! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Justin  On: June 21, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far I really like your ideas and where this story is headed. Although to be honest I think that the story could go without the yaoi but that's my opinion so you don't have to listen to it or not. Anyway I like what you've got going and best of luck to you to continue this story.
 Reviewed By: Switch  On: June 18, 2003 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it I love it I love it!!!! They're both in a basement....together.....at night! *blushes then smacks self* Keep going please!!!!
 Reviewed By: Yoko  On: June 17, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh, I love your story, Yorda. O_O Please continue it!
 Reviewed By: Switch  On: June 15, 2003 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow!! I love your story! If the Originality and Creativity factor went up anymore... I'd give you a hundred! Please update soon because I love this story and I want to see how it ends!

P.S. It's very original, you never really read these stories anymore! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Akari  On: June 14, 2003 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Its sooooo good! The best AU FF8 I have ever read (and I've read a LOT). You MUST continue! *grins* THE PLOT THICKENS!

Now why cant I write this good?

Please keep writting, for the sake of my already lost sanity. PWEASE!!
 Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 13, 2003 14:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's a good story despite the short chapters. i think this chapter was cute!! i undestand that you're bust and everything, but waiting is worth it. keep up the good work. ^_^
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