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Reviewed By: Madamebutterfly1983 On: July 20, 2003 21:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have been reading this story for a couple of chapters. I have to agree with everyone else. This is awesome. Keep It Up!!!! |
Reviewed By: Maple On: July 17, 2003 22:24 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: About time you updated this fic. *mock glares* Squall in here is just so adorably vulnerable and cute! A really enjoyable read ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Switch On: July 11, 2003 02:07 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: When will you update!? *Taps foot expectantly* I'm waiting! :)! I love the story, i just cant seem to tell you enough. Please continue, I want to know how it ends! |
Reviewed By: Stephyyyy On: July 06, 2003 18:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: The story was soo excitingg i loved itt the grammar was okay and that's bout itt ^_^ continue ASAP |
Reviewed By: Akari On: July 06, 2003 11:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was AWESOME! I luff this fic..hey.. *pokes a couple chapters back* Why swedish? i think seifer looks German ^__________^ Cant wait for moooore. Lookin' forward to ze lemon. ^^ KEEP WRITING...and i'll keep reading. |
Reviewed By: rey On: June 30, 2003 09:16 CDT Comment/Review: i really like ur stories, but please make squall
more manly, ok. couse i dont think he can kiss
seifer twice, and they just a friend.
and please write a stories from squall POV. |
Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 10:44 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was great! I loved it and have been waiting forever for you to update! I don't know how many times I have to say that your story is great and to keep it up but I will leave reviews because people are so lazy to do so! I'm writing a SxS fic and I don't even have one review!!! Oh, well. That's my little sad story. You hurry up and continue writing the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel On: June 26, 2003 22:11 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like your story so far and I'm so happy that you're updating almost every day! I can't keep my eyes off of this fic and I love it sooo much. Very good with the story and description so far. I hope you continue soon, but you do that good enough anyway! Later |
Reviewed By: Switch On: June 23, 2003 00:02 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!!! I feel so bad for Seifer, even though he did act like a bastard! But he's sorry and that dumb teacher! AAGGGHHH!!!! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Justin On: June 21, 2003 16:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: So far I really like your ideas and where this story is headed. Although to be honest I think that the story could go without the yaoi but that's my opinion so you don't have to listen to it or not. Anyway I like what you've got going and best of luck to you to continue this story. |
Reviewed By: Switch On: June 18, 2003 19:30 CDT Comment/Review: I love it I love it I love it!!!! They're both in a basement....together.....at night! *blushes then smacks self* Keep going please!!!! |
Reviewed By: Yoko On: June 17, 2003 18:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ohhhhhh, I love your story, Yorda. O_O Please continue it! |
Reviewed By: Switch On: June 15, 2003 14:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow!! I love your story! If the Originality and Creativity factor went up anymore... I'd give you a hundred! Please update soon because I love this story and I want to see how it ends!
P.S. It's very original, you never really read these stories anymore! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Akari On: June 14, 2003 21:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this fic! Its sooooo good! The best AU FF8 I have ever read (and I've read a LOT). You MUST continue! *grins* THE PLOT THICKENS!
Now why cant I write this good?
Please keep writting, for the sake of my already lost sanity. PWEASE!! |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 14:24 CDT Comment/Review: it's a good story despite the short chapters. i think this chapter was cute!! i undestand that you're bust and everything, but waiting is worth it. keep up the good work. ^_^ |
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