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| "the life and times of gemini the bat." Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Title: I can't beleive you Posted this I also can't beleive it's not Butter!
Reviewed By: Twilighteye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's amazing that you actually posted this story Rouge_the_bat_!!!! yes mina's mom is worth going after but um... you might want to think about the plot next time but hey! it's frigging funny! HEY! where's the part with Raven and Starfire you know the the juice scene! ("you likea the juice ehh?!" Yes you do! and so does everyone else! so don't deprive these people! (don't hold out!) also when are you going to finish the Gemini story? you keep talking about it so do it!
| Title: its been awhile...
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey, whats up? No catchy entrence by me, today, cause got BIG news to tell: Mikey B23 IS BACK IN BUSINESS!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: drako3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 18:01 CDT
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I don't quite understand chapter 2. Anyway, Part 6 of Visions is up! | Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 23:08 CDT
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There was somethin' wrong with that last review! I WILL do the idea, (guess the symbols didn't register!) Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!!......... | Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 23:07 CDT
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Mikey B23 here!!!! Thanks for your idea!!! Mikey B23 has decided that he WILL do it!!! Then again, maybe I WOULDN'TUV! Either way...THANKS AGAIN!!! AND THANKS FOR YOUR VOTES!!!!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................. | Reviewed By: rouge_the_bat On: May 28, 2003 21:40 CDT
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suprising, mina and gemini, i thought you say that coming
i saw it coming and i still couldn't get out of the way!
i thought this was a shitty fic and boring sa hell
^^ just kidding see youse guys later | Reviewed By: rouge_the_bat On: May 28, 2003 21:40 CDT
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suprising, mina and gemini, i thought you say that coming
i saw it coming and i still couldn't get out of the way!
i thought this was a shitty fic and boring sa hell
^^ just kidding see youse guys later | Reviewed By: rouge-the_bat On: May 28, 2003 21:32 CDT
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damnit. i can't see the whole thing on my dreamcast.
i thinbk i left out the part where mina stops gemini
from killing shadow(and voices some concerns)
i don't like shadow because he abuses the 3 fundimantal
r's. red hair, rollerblading, and rouge admireing.
i'm a natural brown but now that i'm red i practice all
3 with great skill.and if i make a comment to anyone, i'm
just talking out of my ass.you don't have to censor amy's death
just cause i got all emotinal. speaking of amy i gotta
bake her a cake, in sonic adventures 2 she got her first
boobs. yeah i do indeed suck. by the way gemini has
no intrest whatsoever in mina, but her mom is another
story. i was thinking of having him use one of his
powers to deroboticize her but now it is not nessacary
now that the last robot is sonic's dad. yeah. this months issue
even robotnik is a human.he was abducted by aliens,
with sonic, sonic became a robot, eggman a human, and
the loser would stay human/robot. 3 guesses who won,
first 2 don't count. i have the issue inront of me,
and they don't erase all changes from issue to issue
like my fav. american toon does, ed, edd,n ,eddy.
to avoid conflidct of intrests i will leave the male
caotix out. julie-su is just too cool(kicked vector
RIGHT IN THE FACE)and for the wrighters note, i like
the little pointer thingys, cause i use *'s for thoughts.
BOOM what the fuck was that! fuck it, leave it in THIS SHIT IS PHAT!
sorry too much icp today. i almost got ran over 3 times,
cut off 7 times, and ripped off 2 times. even though
i'm 22 i still use a bike cause i can still go 35.
as in i can break the speedlimit on my bike. plus i'm cheap
oh wait, i'm bitching about sonic not me. sorry.
i hate cheesecake. in the original concept sketch
bunnie and gemini were about to do it and shadow crashed through
the roof. also it was the katerkiller not the spider mech.
the stars were not included, but now im trying to gap
the concert with the morning after without making it suck
suck more dick than monica at a democrat convention.
thank you thank you. also mikey b23 i'm a really big fan.
at least i was till the whole shadow thing. but other people might find it
funny so don't fuck with it. i'm just bitchy.
and drako already knows i'm a big fan of his.
i'vee been to busy wackin it(joke joke! calm down)
to do much else, so you know.
i hate wrighting in paragraphes. got enough of that in school
the only reason it is like it is, is because i wright it section
by section since i'm like sooooo retarded i wright the end, then
i wright the middle, and so on. if you don't know what the biohazard/resident evil
monsters look like, then get off your ass and look for it on google.
it's worth it.
i'm gonna shove NiGHTS in there somewhere. i'm iffy
about creme since i learned she is 6 YEARS OLD!
holy crap! by the way, rouge gets new clothes in
sonic heros which is coming out for all systems in 2004
it will be like sonic adventures, cept there is the dark team
(shadow, rouge YAY!, and some robot) hero team(sonic tails and knuckles)
rose team(amy YAY! big and creme YAY!) and the chaotix team(vector rhino guy
and armodillo, mighty i think, i don't know. they're all dorks anyways.)
also sonic battle for gba and sonic pinball party for gba. in 2003
if you want me to add my charecter tell me at rouge-the_bat@ranmamail.com
as in ranma 1/2. i kinda fell out of the whole ranma thing, so
you know.
i'm also thinking of adding gemini's 3foot tall 12 foot long pet spider
yakamo in. i'm gonna add a shity pic in asap of gemini.
gemini is very periced. his toung, his ears(x9) his eyebrows(x1)
andhis wings(x3) that's per wing/eyebrow/ear.
by the way if i forgot to put it in, he wears a black tuxido
with black leather pants, and a large jacket,like mavado from
mortal kombat deadly alliance, or neo from the matrix.
he wears black italian shoes,and carries his colt python in view.
the gunpowder protects him from the sun's radiation, cause he is a vampire.
he could transit through dimensoins with his crystal
that he hides under his shirt, but he dosent. that is a little known fact abotu vampires
they transit through dimensions with crystals. yup
we ain't deniein the ceramin lion we can't be lyin bout the ceramic lion!
we got the 12oz coffee cup coffee cup YUP YUP YUP!!!
too much tom green too i guess.
heres somthing, picture gemini singing the bum bum song.
that is too easy to picture to wright a fanfic about
well thats all i guess, by the way. mikey, your e-mail is in your profile.
you click on it, then you choose e-mail author/artist.
speaking of drop me a line. so SEE YA
jesus dosen't love you but thinks you have a great personality
~george carlton | Reviewed By: drako3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 17:55 CDT
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I only have two problems. One, you need more paragraphs. Seperate it a little. It kinda runs together.
two, if you want to put in a comment, put a * or something and at the bottom, tell what it means. Other than that, it's cool. Thanks for saying about my story! The Mina/Drake jealousy thing was kinda surprising, but hey. I got my mongoose, so i can't complain. Oh, and just thank Drake for Drake. I couldn't change my name from drako when i first got it.
Mina...joker, speedster, cook, singer, and snack. Drake's life... is good. | Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 17:04 CDT
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By the way...I noticed that you E-Mailed me on this one day! How did you get my E-Mail? I didn't post it on this site...did I? Anyways...Be dure to Review "Hilarious Outakes!" for me!!!! Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......................
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Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!! I REALLY liked this story!! You are REALLY good at this!! By the way...Thanks for Reviewing my "Hilarious Outakes!" Series! I changed Scene 2 for ya, and I got 18 scenes in there!! If you read it, then leave me a review behind so I know how I did...Kay? Thanks!!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..............................
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