| "Gin no Umi o Wataru" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: INU On: August 20, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE PLEASE MUST NO WHAT HAPPENS ::jumps around room excitedly:: MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!! MUST READ hehe........opps i did it again |
Reviewed By: QueenOfGames On: August 17, 2003 15:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh No! Jahi don't even go there! Seto is not Sef, well Kinda but you know what I mean! You had your turn sweety give it up and let Joey be JOEY! DAMNIT! lol ::hopefully look:: Lemony goodness soon? PLEASE?!?!?!
The * Queen Of Games * |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! AN UPDATE!!!
*dances*
omg! this is so kick ass!! you have to update this again soon! |
Reviewed By: M. North On: July 16, 2003 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! Please write more of this fic for me to read! |
Reviewed By: Jade On: July 19, 2003 23:27 CDT
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i love it! please write more! |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY!! PLZ UPADTE SOON!! OH FOR THE LOVE OF RA!! |
Reviewed By: QueenOfGames On: August 24, 2003 16:35 CDT
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AWW! ::tear:: So Cute! Jahi, sweety, you know I love, BUT IF YOU SO MUCH AS HARM ON LITTLE HAIR ON JOEYS CUTE LITTLE STUBLY CHIN I WILL UNLEASH THE RATH OF A QUEEN! UNDERSTOOD? Ok Good! ;) Good chappie, m'dear update soon... like uh now now??
The *Queen Of Games * |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101 On: July 07, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very cool story .Please write more I want to know what happens.Oh and my friend thinks so too. |
Reviewed By: Ryou_Yoru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!!!^_^ I've been reading this story for a while and i love it!! I've been waiting for the next chapter and it was worth the wait!! But you better get the next chapter out sooner!! Onegai?!? I love this story!!! Keep up the good work i love the Seto and Jou- ness you put into it. But i wish that Malik could have Marik to himself without Rashid...He pisses me off...Oh well...And Ryou and Bakura are like my favorite couple ever!! (Going through a Seto/Jou faze right now though...) Please get the next chapter out soon!!
Love,
Ryou_Yoru |
Reviewed By: Zel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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this is a vary good fic so far i love it i like your style and i love the idea |
Reviewed By: yamiyugikun, gokuchanai On: June 19, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Joey looked up and noticed Seto sitting at his desk, the way the highlighted and caressed the planes on his cheeks, painting them with gold and rose. Joey flushed as he thought of the way Seto’s hair seemed to hide a hidden flame, trapping in it’s mahogany folds the light of the dying sun. Smiling, he stood up to walk over to him. A flash of reflected reddish sunlight hit his eyes, and he noticed a small metal mallet in Seto’s hand.
DUDE!!! I LOVE your description here, you are truly painting with words! Praises sensei! I also like the tension with Honda disliking Seto. Have Honda and Seto fight over Joey. That's be a great love triangle and a very original idea! Let the drama begin! Also, add lots of beautiful description to your next chapter too! I'll add some and/or help you when I beta it. |
Reviewed By: none On: June 17, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really Good! |
Reviewed By: Larania [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 16:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hm... Interesting. I hope that Jou helps Seto with who his problem with self mutilation... |
Reviewed By: Jadej.j On: June 05, 2003 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you got the dreams of the past going with Jou and Seto |
Reviewed By: Sak On: June 04, 2003 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I think that's all i can say...WOW!!!! This is sooooooo good. One suggestion though...when in love making scenes dont use the word 'cock' or 'penis'...its just sound wrong...WOW though you are so good!!!! This is like one of the best stories i've ever read! And that's saying a lot!!! Keep it up!!! |
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