| "Gin no Umi o Wataru" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sekhamet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I think this is a very good story but dont Joey have honey brown eyes i am pretty sure he does. Well cant wait to read the rest
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 05:01 CDT
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Great chapters. I like this a lot. I'm glad that they are finally in the VR and doing something.
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Title: WWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEE!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: January 17, 2006 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay update! Ah, Jahi is helping Jou with Sef and Seto. Ryou and the others are slowly wearing down, and I think we learned something new about Noa and Noski. However, the grammer got a little scrambled at the important parts. Maybe you should either look over what you have and see if parts are being left out when you upload the chappter. As of right now, I'm not too sure what exactly is annoying the aqua haired pair, unless it's Kaiba being un-Kaiba like. Anyway, I hope to see more of this. Good Luck!
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Title: More?
Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 23:28 CST
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This story is great. I hope you update. Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: August 19, 2005 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shaking head* I agree with Seto! Tristan went too far! I do agree that what Seto did to Tristan's mom was wrong! But Tristan crossed the line when he handed Bakare over to Noah! By deleivering the code to Noah! Bakare had nothing to do with Tristan's mom being fired! So why would Tristan go and drag his friends into his petty feud with Seto? A feud that's over 5 yrs old! Kill Tristan, or make him suffer! Question-would Tristan's mom approve of Tristan's recent actions? I cannot blame Ryou for being mad!
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Title: review of new chapter
Reviewed By: QueenOFGames2 On: July 22, 2005 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn thing I don't know if the review went thru. Basically I said fuck tristan for making Ryou cry and I hope he dies in the end of this! And update soon! the *Queen Of Games*
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Reviewed By: Queenofgames2 On: July 22, 2005 21:56 CDT
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my poor Ryou, he shouldn't ever be alone, damn Tristan I hope he dies by the end of this... for serious! Update when you can! The *Queen Of Games*
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I lost it for a while but I am so glad I found it again. Please update soon.
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Title: re:chapter 14?
Reviewed By: QueenOfGames2 On: March 30, 2005 02:05 CST
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NOW NKOSI DIES!! He did NOT just take MY MAN! ::stabs evil bitch:: You're gonna need a bigger budget for your Noa's and his pre-carnation... I'm gonna keep killing anything with green hair! Great chapter ud when you can! The *Queen Of Games*
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Title: Ack! My Review Was Cut Off!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 00:15 CST
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I'm sorry I didn't respond to your last e-mail! *Panic, Panic* I got busy with school, and then life, and then, well random insanity followed by more school. I'm not even sure if I'll be able to respond to any e-mail you send, and I feel like a bad person for that *sad face*! But-but! I still love this story! And I'm glade you're putting so much effort into it, it shows! I'm just happy you're still writing, even if it's months and months between updates, it's worth it. Well, until next time, Good Luck!
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 00:13 CST
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I'm sorry I didn't respond to your last e-mail! *Panic, Panic* I got busy with school, and then life, and then, well random insanity followed by more school. I'm not even sure if I'll be able to respond to any e-mail you send, and I feel like a bad person for that >__
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye (nli) On: January 25, 2005 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, wow!! Wonderful chapter!! I cannot wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: January 25, 2005 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bad cliffy. I love it. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: Beysie (it won't let me log in!) On: January 25, 2005 14:43 CST
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Wow... not Bakura! Damn, and I was hoping for more lemons with him and Tristan and Ryou... I do hope they figure out how to stop Noa, and fast! Those poor kids! At least Seto and Joey seem to have made up... Please update soon, ok?
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Title: I don’t know how you got on my favorites, but I’m glad you did.
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating chp.14, or I never would have found this fic. It's gorgeous, highly detailed, all the pairings are believable, and i love how you don't rush the characters or make any of them seems stupid. I love how engrossing the plot is, so many layers, almost too many stories to follow. Actually one would probably be lost if not for you putting up the time, date, and place before each chp. section. The only flaws I can see in this fic. are the usual grammar and spelling errors, but they are nothing more then a minor irritant. I don't know if you are planing on continuing this anytime soon, but if it is within your power I beg you to do so. There are far too few all encompassing fics. like this out there, and I will be happily following this one to the best of my abilities. And if you are wondering, yes it took me until tonight to read through to chp. 14.
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