| "Temptation from all Sides" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad job try to be a little more discriptive. Very refreshing to read a sex story that didn't center around course language.
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Title: Should've known...
Reviewed By: Triplechaos0 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 22:34 CST
Comment/Review:
If it's you, Mike, it goes without saying that there wouldn't be any sex involved.
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Reviewed By: GogetaSS7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems to be a good idea. It kinda leaves u wondering about where they go from there. So maybe u should write that sequel. |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, but it seemed to be fractured a bit. Some of the sentences were missing their starting words. Maybe it happened when it was posted or something. |
