| "kokoro no arashi" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: rebekah On: August 28, 2004 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh this is soo good!! Please finish this story!!
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Reviewed By: Ciu Sune On: July 29, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic alot. You are able to capture most of the attitudes of the characters. Sometimes I find a little occ in the midst of someone attitude, but the overall story is so good that it doesn't matter so much. And I really like the JinxTouya pairing too, no matter how slight it is. |
Reviewed By: Francie On: July 17, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I like your ideas. I, myself, am a total H/K fan and love all the fics that show them together! I hope you will update this story soon, cause I can't wait to see what happens! Please, keep it going! |
Reviewed By: kawaii kalika On: June 11, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, you can't end it here!!! i must have more of this fic...*runs around pulling hair out of head* ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh...your writing style is absolutely amazing. you're really descriptive without being bombastic about it, ya know? ok, so i'm off to read some more of your fics, this one rocks by the way...just in case you didn't catch that. ;) |
