| "Bottled Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I notice that Miroku keeps shifting from "she" to "he" and back when referring to the First.
Awwww....!
Sango is so much fun... So Miroku thinks it's possible to get them out of this mess without ending up dead or wished. Hm. And here I thought Kagome was going to have to use that last one to justify Inuyasha's actions.
I wonder... The reason that Inuyasha's master can't wish Inuyasha free is because the make-him-a-WB wish was granted by a ninth and Inuyasha's only a tenth, no? I wonder... |
Reviewed By: Muse-chan On: August 24, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Actually I've been reading this fic, but never actually got a chance to review. Now I actually have that chance. I just wanted to say that this is a really clever fic. It's not fast pace when it comes to romance, and to be frankly honest... I actually don't like it,when the characters get a little tooromantic a little too fast. (I have no idea why my space-bar is acting like a delete button, but it's starting to irritate me.)It
seems... Unreal. *sigh* maybe that's just me, but anyways the story is progressing really nicely. This story, along with a few others are my favorites because they arenot rushed,and I believe the authors actually care if their readers can understand it. So to make it short, it's well thought out and not rushed. Whoo, I just wanted to tell you, and can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I'm really curious to know what the 'First Wishbringer' will be like. Cya~good luck. P.S. Ignore any words that are connected and should not be.my computer is acting funny. It just won't space right. |
Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 21:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon! |
Reviewed By: spikes_slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEE! Looooooove it! The latest chapters were great! Can't wait till the next update! |
Reviewed By: Neko Kaogme-chan On: August 17, 2003 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! :D Hey, can't wait until the next chapter! You're a great writer! |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As great as ever ^^
( and by the way , hope your results will be good !!!!! ^^)!
We trust you with your story , don't worry ^^
See you next chapter !!
Kirisame. |
Reviewed By: ryuu On: August 03, 2003 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on now, i need ta know how inu and kag handle things now... i want ta know what they do now that kagome only has 1 wish left, and what she wishes for... i want to know if inuyasha lets himself love kagome the same way she does him... i want to stop racking my poor brain about it cuz it ain't used ta thinkin this much!! so please update ASAP!!! |
Reviewed By: koinu-chan On: July 31, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!! turning him into a rat... now thats classic. now all we have to see is how inu and kag end up.... please don't disapointment us (not that you would.... i hope), ja! |
Reviewed By: Morro On: July 30, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Ding Dong the Prink is dead!! MUWAHHHAAAHHHAAA!!!!(evil laughter) :)
thats was great! but your killing me with the suspence!!!!
I don't want it to be a sad ending--- but if you do it well I'll forgive you for it. (maybe....)
Please put more fluff for the end at least!!! Even if it is sad.... :(
HURRY FOR GODS SAKE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Setryochi On: July 30, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I loved it. And the one part I loved the most was when Kagome was watching the documentary on the lions. The spelling and grammar was much better than most (specially mine) but it still had some errors. Totally creative plot! I enjoyed it so much I wanted to wait till I got to the last chapter posted to review because I really didn't want to write a whole bunch of these each night. Please keep writting, I hope to see the next chapter soon, love it!
Set-chan |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just so lovely , so wonderful ....
You're great...
I LOVE YOU !!!!!!!!!!
* Now and forever * |
Reviewed By: Inuheart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 08:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
All ratings:1000000000000000000000000000000and so
Sing song voice-Narku is a rat... Naraku is a squished rat...
Thank you so very much for updating and by the way this is so suspensful.
What will become off Inu and Kagome?
Will they live happily ever after. I really reawlyy hope they do!
Update soon as possible!(^_^) |
Reviewed By: nobody On: July 27, 2003 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I swear this is the most cutest story, please contiune with it sooner than later! |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 27, 2003 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn..i'm getting all teary eyed.
after all is done and everything seem to be alright something else comes up. and still makes your life an unhappy one. ;_;
keep updating and keep on trucking.
is she going to free the inuyasha? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_______________^ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAH!!!!!
I can't just stop laughing!!!!!this IS HILARIOUS!!!
This damn fucking asshole changed into a crushed rat!!AWSOME!!!
HOOOwwww!so sweety!!I wish there were a way to use this tenth wish to make Kagome happy and Inu free!they really deserve it after all that happened to them!!^,^
But...oh man!Now I'm worried!Didn't Miroku said he and the first wishbringer, would come back and beat the shit out of Inu,if he breaks another law??(oh! well, Inu would just have to take care of them then!!^.~(He's the best!!))
Keeping my breath until the next chapter!Please don't let me suffocate!!(*turning blue* @___@;;)
So write quickly please!^.^ |
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