| "Bottled Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: coreanqt On: March 15, 2004 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMg ive reviewed before but i just have to say that u r awesome!!!! Theres a song from hoobastank that ive been listenin too and its called the "reason" heard of it? yes? no? well neways the lyrics to the song go perfectly with dead famous. You should listen to the song its really good!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 02:52 CST
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wow...i thought this one was done. good finish, although the beggining was quite confusing. yes, that deffinately makes a good use of the overused phrase of happily ever after. great story, now i get to see how dead famous has ended. have fun
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: March 14, 2004 20:19 CST
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Ah, yes, very good!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen not-logged-in On: March 14, 2004 15:58 CST
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Found something: "Angrily, he lashed out at the nearest thing - one of the pots that had been lined up alongside the wall of the hut he leaned on. It shattered on impact and at the same moment emitted an explosion of blue dust…" That sounds like he BROKE the pot that Miroku was in. Wouldn't that have killed him? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Then that is what I will beseech you with." I think Miroku means "bestow." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Buyo made sounds that no mortal cat should make…" Heh heh heh!
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: March 14, 2004 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww!! ^.^ That was cute. Cheezy? Maybe just a little bit. ^_- Just kidding! - i loved it. ^_^ You're wonderful, you know. Very, very, very, very talented. ^-^ and creative! heh heh. So yea... here's to the last time i get to review bottled genius! *tear* ::raises glass of...soda:: and to you, rozefire! *wink* cheers! ~Kate ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 09:34 CST
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I can totally buy Inuyasha getting wish-a-fied that way. Poor guy didn't even know that it wasn't a hypothetical question. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Awwwwwwwww!! Here piggy piggy piggy! "Worse half of a love-hate relationship," is so adorable. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Heh heh! At least Buyo was suitably shocked at Inuyasha's suggestion. Play it safe, guys! It's a little early for puppy-eared half-wishbringer offspring! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ . . . Clueless doggie-boys: The ultimate in contraceptives. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ And but for homework, life would be grand. It's so true! This ending is just bittersweet enough to not be saccharine. Masterful. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I think that Miroku having to slap himself is quite possibly the most priceless thing I've ever seen in Inuyasha fanfiction. And if you could bottle THAT...
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Reviewed By: galene On: March 14, 2004 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful! totally wonderful!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Aewi (not login) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 22:22 CST
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Thank you for writing Epilogue ^_^ It's been 6 months since your last update in October. Thank you thank you! I really love this story!
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Reviewed By: physcho_bitch(not logged in) On: March 13, 2004 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good!!!! I'm so sad it's over, yet so happy too. AARRGGHH!!! i think i'm gonna go cry now...*sob*
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Title: "Rozefire" no more?
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute. That was a very realistic ending. I'm glad you told us how InuYasha came to be a wish bringer. Only InuYasha would tell someone to hurry up and kill him because his schedule was "tight". And I'm happy that you told us that Miroku was free and not leaving it for us to assume. Though it was funny when he hit himself for doing or thinking anything perverted. I am going to look up your bio to see why you are retiring the name "Rosefire". But I am happy you will still be writing. When you come out with your new identity just send me the link to your new story. I love the way you write and stumbling upon your work again might not be easy with the site being so huge.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 16:00 CST
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OHHHHHHHHH I LOVE IT!!!!! great incredible magnificent absolutely adorable story!! i love you in a fan author sort of way! =D
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Reviewed By: DivaLicious89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww happily ever after....thats soo sweet hey and i was wrong you did finish this storee~super glad you did too!!!!:P~well g2g lots of love~DivaLicious89
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Reviewed By: raaaaay On: March 13, 2004 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww...i had i had to admit i had a couple coughing fits in that epilogue...you still know how to work in those psuedo "sex scenes". hehehe. those still get me to grin. and i thought this story was done for. well, let me tell you, you ended it perfectly. dont like to leave people hanging do ya? ok, im off to finish dead famous *sob*. so sad all your stories are ending. trying to get them all finished before the trip i presume. well, good luck with whatever you have left!
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Reviewed By: Eartha (not signed in) On: March 13, 2004 11:21 CST
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Such a sweet ending!! Corny there in the last few sentences...but sweet. It was a great fic. I can't wait till you come out with more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: March 13, 2004 10:50 CST
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oh finally the epilog waited for that for ages well coolie epilog first i thot u messed somtin up wen i started readin the beggining cuz ther was no mention of sess in the story but it eventually all fell together so coolie ficy as usuall cya! rite more ficys soon plz cya!
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