| "Bottled Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 00:34 CDT
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I was right! I was right! They did ask Shippo for a wish. Go me! Go me! Okay and a more serious note. Great chapter. And there is another delicious chapter coming our way. *licking lips in anticipation* I had to admit this chapter has eased my mind at InuYasha and Kagome's happy ending. I wonder what she is going to tell her family. But what happened to Sango and Miroku? I have to know....come on just a little hint.
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 21:27 CDT
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THANK GOD YOU CAME OUT WITH THAT CHAPTER!!!! I WAS SOOOOOOO DEPRESSED WHEN YOU STOPPED THE LAST CHAPTER AFTER INUYASHA'S NOTE!!!! IT LOOKS LIKE THERE WILL BE A HAPPY ENDING TO THIS AND I WILL BE ONE OF THE HAPPIEST PEOPLES ON THE PLANET!!!! UPDATE SOON OR FACE MY WRATH!!!!!!!
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Title: Ithilwen
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 21:22 CDT
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Grr! My first review got zapped! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I think you mean "consciousness," not "conscious." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I am sure you are missing, if not by much, all the meepy sounds I'm making right now. What with the talk of Life Exchange having a less-than-idyllic ending, I'm sure glad to see things work out kinda' well here. Inuyasha's not even stuck-as-a-human-forever (but maybe he is!) free, and Miroku's gonna be let loose to not slap himself again, and Shippo got his digs in. It's so [MEEPY SOUND DELETED]!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~And it's not even stupidly overdone-sweet! The part with Kagome almost getting picked up by those potentially dangerous losers, not distracting. The despair, the pain, the what-if-Inu-doesn't-end-up-okay... Oh heck with it! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
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Title: Sensory Dep.
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 21:18 CDT
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 20:53 CDT
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i drove myself insane trying to think of the question and i still didnt get it until i read it! argh i feel so stupid. well you are a veeeeeeery good author n i was so excited that this chap was posted i almost hada party. i think outta all ur stories either this one or 28 days is my fave. um...this one! =) keep up the good work n post asap =)
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Title: please
Reviewed By: GREAT! On: October 08, 2003 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please put the next chapter up as soon as possible please.
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Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: Cattykit On: October 08, 2003 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! YAY! YAY! You updated at last! Remember me? Probably not since you have so many reviewers U_U. LOL. I saw that you updated on ff.net but I couldn't get to the story. It said 'chapter does not exist', but I was dying to know what happened and to review so I came here, and what do you know! It was here! O M G I loved this sooooo much! Bottled Genius has got to be my most fav story! I'm soooooooo glad you updated! You really made my day! Such a kawaii ending! And also, loved your picture you posted on ff.net. So that was what he looked like... I imagined him with his hair down. You're a really good artist you know that? And you have GOT to tell me how you got it posted on your profile like that! It's so cool! And cool signature btw. Pretty clever! LOL. Please come out with the epilogue soon! Though, I won't rush you with all the college stuff you must have to put up with. Congrats on a great chapter! ~cattykit~ P.S. Expect another review from me, hehe, I'm probably going to review for you on ff.net ^_^ See ya!
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Title: THAT'S IT!!!
Reviewed By: Aditu On: October 08, 2003 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright....I have a complaint.... you have completely and utterly ruined my concentration, I should be doing other things but nooooo, I see you put up new chapters for any of your stories and I can't resist the urge to keep my butt glued to this stupid chair and read them, lol. There I've vented, even though in all fairness it's not your fault just mine for being weak when it comes to excellent InuYasha fanfics. That is my only complaint, other than the usual that I wish for more updates for all your fanfics in progress as I believe I have read all of them by now that I can find on both MM and FF and I believe on Iridescent Dreams as well. Anyway, once again, loved the new chapter and though I am sad to see this all end I know that you will continue with other works, thank God! Thank you for the update, and for several of the other ones you have done recently as well. Best Wishes!
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: Kagome910 On: October 08, 2003 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading your story for a long time and I love it. i just figured out how to review this .....just an idiot with a computer you could label me as. Anyway can't wait till the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: qazwsxp On: October 07, 2003 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rally am enjpying your ifc. That one chapter, "Note To Self" was so sad. I almost cried. But I didn't. I've never cried at a movie and/or book EVER. But that almost made me cry. Update Soon!!!
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Title: ...?!
Reviewed By: koinu-chan On: October 04, 2003 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... he's gone... NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *sniffle sniffle* i don't want inu to be gone... wait a sec, wasn't there some planning schemeing... this should be good... HURRY AND UPDATE, I STILL GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!! love, me! ja ne
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Reviewed By: Neko Kagome-chan On: September 30, 2003 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Priceless....:) Simply great.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: InvisibleRain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic... it became just as real to me as watching the series on screen! That was incredible... The flow was perfect, the timing of each characters entrance, the death of Naraku.. now I'm wondering too what those flesh thingies were.. hm.. You've totally taken a disney-destroyed tale and made it your own... and beyond that. I can't wait for your next chapter! Too bad its the last :(
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Reviewed By: Angel_BlueFlame On: September 27, 2003 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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omfg.... You're an awesome writer. You're new chapter made me cry...TWICE! omg. It was great. Keep up the good work! ^_~ L8r, Angel
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Reviewed By: ME On: September 27, 2003 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawww...make me want to cry!!! yes, I'll be sad too when this fic ends---loved every minute of reading it!!! can't wait to see how you get the two back together ('cause I KNOW this WILL happen^_^...you couldn't possibly disappoint me now.....could you???...nah!) hey, I'm all up for two more chapters--anything to prolong the inevitable--I want to say 'update soon', but then that'll mean the end will be coming that much sooner---but ....I can't wait either!!!
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